Mere Jalte Ghar Pe Haath Na Seko,.

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«Reply #15 on: October 01, 2009, 02:20:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 30, 2009, 09:28:36 AM
Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob.... Last four lines lajawab  Applause
Daad kabul farmayiyega zarur  Usual Smile

Shukrioya Sis Kabul Hai Mujhe,.
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«Reply #16 on: October 02, 2009, 10:33:56 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!   Laajawab Azeem bhai
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«Reply #17 on: October 02, 2009, 01:23:25 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 30, 2009, 10:55:01 AM
Wah bahut bahut khoob Azeem bhai,really touched,very beautiful n mindblowing creation,wonderful lines by all.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Madhuwesh Sis,.
Khushi Hui Aapka Comments Paake,.

Thank U,.
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«Reply #18 on: October 02, 2009, 01:24:32 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 30, 2009, 12:55:46 PM
Wah Wah Kya baat Azeem bhaijan...Aap pehle bhi aur aaj bhi mere yoindia pe fav writers main se ek hai...Bahaut acha lagta hai apka kalam padkar...Likte rahiye...

Nice one by you too Alam jee...

Shukriya Mere Bhai ye Mera Khushnaseebi Hai Ke Main Tumhaara Chahita Hoon,.

Than U Yaar,.
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«Reply #19 on: October 04, 2009, 10:25:21 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on September 30, 2009, 02:15:22 PM
bahut bahut achhe azeem.
Really speechless ke kya kahun,

Loved these lines the most.


Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Shukriya Huzaina Sis,.
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«Reply #20 on: October 04, 2009, 10:26:20 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on September 30, 2009, 06:53:33 PM
koi nigaah daale gahr pe tere, wo banjaiga dushman zamaane ka.
tum ho hi itne saade, allah khudhee karega hifazat tere gharaane ka...

fikar mat karo, ji, tumhaare upne har haal me tumhaari laaj rahkaenge...
dushman kare sahi waar, upni jalaee huwi aag k chulay me aap hee pakaenge.


gr8 work Ustaad "ji" MA Amazing hai dude!


Shukriya Ji,.  Aur Aapne Bhi MA Achchi Lines Likhi Hai,.
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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2009, 07:17:09 AM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on September 30, 2009, 11:53:59 PM
Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,



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bahoot khoob,kiya kehne ,, Applause

Shukriya Nazar Ghouri JI,.
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«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2009, 01:21:43 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-





...kya baat hai Azeem bhai...bahut badhiya likha hai aapne...

...pattharon ki chahat mein heere phisal jaate hai...
...wah wah..!
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«Reply #23 on: October 08, 2009, 08:46:21 AM »
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Quote from: Vikk on October 02, 2009, 10:33:56 AM

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!   Laajawab Azeem bhai

Shukriya Vikk Ji,.

Quote from: Shihab on October 05, 2009, 09:21:06 AM
Azeem Kya Andaaz e Bayaan Hai Yaar
Sach Mein Ghazab Ka Kalaam Likha Hai.

ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe Ameen




Shukriya Mere Bhai, KHushi Hui Ke Tumne MerePOst Pe Comment Diya,.

Thank U So Much,.

Kaash Ke Kuch LIkhkar Bhi Jaate,.
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«Reply #24 on: October 08, 2009, 10:47:38 AM »
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Waah Ajeem ji...bahut gehraayi mein jaa kar ye rachna ki hai aapne....
hats off to you....kaafi gehri soch rakhte hai aap... icon_salut
lajwaab.....superb
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«Reply #25 on: October 09, 2009, 04:36:54 PM »
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Waah Ajeem ji...bahut gehraayi mein jaa kar ye rachna ki hai aapne....
hats off to you....kaafi gehri soch rakhte hai aap... icon_salut
lajwaab.....superb

Shukriya Nikhaar JI, Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Hume,.
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«Reply #26 on: October 12, 2009, 03:47:52 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on September 30, 2009, 06:59:36 AM

Jaise Hi Hamare Rang Nikal Jaate Hain,.
Logon Ke Dekhne Ke Dhang Badal Jaate Hain,.

Aansuon Ke Samander Mein Zyada Bhi Na Doobo,.
Guzre Pal, Aane Waale Zamaane Ningal Jaate Hain,.

Wo Hain Door Hamaare Aansuon Ko Dekhkar "Doston,.
Kya Pata Unhe,
Kisi Ke Kareeb Aane Se Hum Kaise Behal Jaate Hain,.

Milaa Hai Ye Tajruba Bhi, Zindagi Se Mujhe "Azeem,.
Kaise, Pattharon Ki Chahat Mein, Heere Phisal Jaate Hain,.

Mere Jalte Ghar Par Apne, Haath Na Sekho Doston,.
Tapish Unme Bhi Hoti Hai, Jo Suraj Dhal Jaate Hain,.

-Azeem-




Wah Mere Bhaiiiii.. Kya baat Hai.. Ek ek Lafz Such aur Dard Me Bheega Hua Likha hai aapne.. Lafzon Ko Bahut Hi Khubsoorati Se Sajaaya hai.. Bahut Gaharaai se Likhe Aapke Yeh Alfaaaz Dil Tak Utar gaye.. Bahut Khooooooob Azeem Bhai.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #27 on: October 13, 2009, 06:43:45 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on October 12, 2009, 03:47:52 AM

Wah Mere Bhaiiiii.. Kya baat Hai.. Ek ek Lafz Such aur Dard Me Bheega Hua Likha hai aapne.. Lafzon Ko Bahut Hi Khubsoorati Se Sajaaya hai.. Bahut Gaharaai se Likhe Aapke Yeh Alfaaaz Dil Tak Utar gaye.. Bahut Khooooooob Azeem Bhai.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**

BOhat Bohat Shukriya Aapka,Vikas Bhai,JO Apne Hamari Koshish KO Saraaha,.

Thank U,.
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