Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !! -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Roja

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«Reply #15 on: May 28, 2009, 03:19:57 PM »

Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM

bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!

Zindagi se khuch is taraha kash-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
sahera me samandar bhala kyon kar mile !!
pyaas mere laboon pe rah-rah ke tadapti rahi !!

mazloom-o-masomoo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
adath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

andheron se mahobbath khuch is qadar bad gayi !!
mere ghar ke charagon ko raushni se bagawath rahi !!

ruswa-e-ke qauf ne mujhe hamesha rok rakha !!
meri har khwaish mere ander sisakti rahi !!

aur mere zabt ka imtehan khuch is taraha liya usne !!
aake khushiyan mere dar se palat ti rahi !!

mahobbath karne ka sila bhi kya qoob mila qadeer !!
tum tadapte rahe umra bhar wo tadpaati rahi !!

........Qadeer..........

Qadeer bhaiya, bahut bahut acchi gazal likha hai aapne
Daad kabul kijiyega zarur


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junaidqadir

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Re: Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

«Reply #16 on: May 28, 2009, 03:23:20 PM »

roja bahen adaab !!

bahoth dib baad meri thread me apki dad wah khushnasibi hai is haqeeq bhai ki !! kahan ho , kaisi ho app !!

"Badle-Badle se sarkar nazar ate hain !!
Hame to qayamath ke asar nazar ate hain !!

he he he he he he he .........NM

Apka Bhai

Qadeer


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Re: Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

«Reply #17 on: May 28, 2009, 07:23:28 PM »

Bahut Bahut Bhaut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..Har ek sher Lajaawab,Par Iss Sher Mein To Samundar Ki Gehrai Hai..

Bahut Ache..

"Andhero Se Mohabbat Kuch Iss Kadar Bad Gayi,
Mere Ghar Ke Chiraago Ko Roshni Se Bhagaawat Rahi"


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junaidqadir

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Re: Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

«Reply #18 on: May 29, 2009, 07:04:43 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 28, 2009, 07:23:28 PM

khwaish sahab adaab !!

Bahoth shukarguzaar hon apka jo apne waqath diya aur pasand faramaya !! allah apko khush rakhe !!

Duvaun ka muntazir !!

Qadeer


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junaidqadir

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Re: Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

«Reply #19 on: May 29, 2009, 11:00:22 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on May 21, 2009, 10:12:34 AM

Wah Kya khoob ghazal likhi hai Qadeer Ji, Bahut Umda aur lajawaab

Usko jaate hue dekhna mujhe pasandh na tha,
Aur isi zidd me use dekh paane ki chahat umar bhar machalti rahi,

Naaz se toda tha phool ek unke liye baag se,
Aaj baagbaa.n ne bataya har kalli unki chah me barso bikharti rahi,

Wo kehte the ham na rakhenge kashti-e-ishq me paan.v,
Unhe sambhal lene ke waade ke liye mein umar bhar girti-sambhalti rahi.

Shally.

Subhan allah shally ji kya likha ab to hame ap se khuch sikhna padega !! maafi ka haqdar hon mai bahoth late reply de raha hon kyoon ke busy tha mai allah apke kalamoo ko miyari izzath de Ameen !!

Qadeer


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Niha Khan

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Re: Pyaas mere labon pe tadapti rahi !!

«Reply #20 on: April 22, 2011, 05:23:31 PM »

Quote from: junaidqadir on May 21, 2009, 06:43:53 AM

bahoth din pahele likhi eak ghazal apki nazar karta hon hifazath ki jiyega !!


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