WO KHET JOTTA HAI

by NETRAPAL on October 25, 2007, 09:02:02 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 29, 2007, 03:30:56 PM »
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Bahoot Acche Pooja Didi,.
Netra Bhai,.
Rajbir Bhai Picture's Shares Karne Ka Shukriya,.
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«Reply #16 on: October 29, 2007, 05:41:11 PM »
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shukaria Netra ji and Lil Bro!!!
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«Reply #17 on: October 30, 2007, 09:25:15 AM »
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«Reply #18 on: October 30, 2007, 09:27:09 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: November 10, 2008, 09:05:23 PM »
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Thanks Sonia, is thread ki phir se yaad dilane ki... Acha lagega agar aor log bhi yaha is vishaye per kuch rachnaye likhe
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«Reply #20 on: November 10, 2008, 09:11:36 PM »
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Netra, Pooja...aapki rachnaayen padh kar...aur Rajbir ji ki lagayi hui tasveerain dekh kar dil dehal gaya....Ek ek daana na jaane kitna ton bojhh uthaaye hue hota hai khud main...Kaun bhala ada kar sakta hai ye karz. sad5 sad5
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«Reply #21 on: November 10, 2008, 09:57:19 PM »
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netra ji ko shat shat naman...is anuthe vishay par kalam uthane ke liye.......aur pooja ji ke to kya kahne........unhone ise behad tafseel se aage badhaya....
Aur Raj bhai ne tasweeron se jo dardnaak kavita sunaai dil bhar aaya....behad sashakt, behad marmik...
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«Reply #22 on: November 10, 2008, 10:05:41 PM »
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Itani der se Bekarar ji apko is thread mai dekh rahi thi.. socha apki kalam ka jadu ajj hume bhi padne ko milega.. magar ajj bhi hum apki rachna se vanchit he rah gaye sad5

apko mera likha pasand ayya... uske liye tahe dil se shukargujar hu!!

Thanks Celmira.... waise app bhi char lines likh deti to dil ko skoon atta
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«Reply #23 on: November 10, 2008, 11:14:01 PM »
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  love9 aap sub ko Adaab... Bohat khob hay ju aap log ferma rahien hien... aap sub salamat raho aur aaisay he aik dosray ko aasaniyan aur khushian bant-tay raho.. love9

Duaa go.. love4

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«Reply #24 on: November 12, 2008, 09:11:13 AM »
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jameedar ko kisaan me bahoot poorana rishtaa raha hai jameedaro ja jilm or kissano ka sangarsh kabhee suna tha bade budho se kuch kitabo me padha uskee ek poem ek patrika me maine bheje thee use pesh karne kee koshish kar rahaa hoo.....bihaar rajasthaan me abhee bhee yahee haallat hai julmo se tank aagar kisaan ne sangharsh karke apne hak ko kaise paayaa

bade budho se suna
kitabo me padha tha.
kisaan kee us kahanee ko
iteehaas me padha tha..

hooe the julm kisaano par
behrahmo ke maasoomo par
rakh dete the shilaa peeth
par unkee......
nahi chuka pate the jo
lagaan or kar.......

dulhaa bhee nahi chadhtaa thaa
ghodee pe koi
nahi banaa paataa thaa ghar
pakka bhee koi
rote the masoom se chote bachhe
khaa ke kode we massom peeth par

karte chaakree har din wo unkee
nahee hotee thee inteehaa julmo
kee jinkee......
karthee the atthaas jalim unmaad me
loot kar aabroo kisee gareeb kee..

julmo ko achanak ant pal ayaa
julmo kee intaa ko sheersh pe pyaa
hookar sanghthit kisaano ne
karantee-bigul bajaaya
ukhad gayee jameedaree tab
jab din kisaan kaa ayaa....

netra....
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«Reply #25 on: November 12, 2008, 10:14:19 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
2GOOD NETRA JI KYA KAHE AAP TO HAMESHA
HI BAHUT UMDA LIKHTE HAI...
REALLY A GOOD WORK...
KEEP WRITTING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #26 on: November 12, 2008, 03:08:00 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji
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«Reply #27 on: November 12, 2008, 08:44:45 PM »
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Bohat khoob Niterpal ji.... wah kia bian kia aap nay wh jeetay rahien aur issi tarah hamien apni piari shayri say nawaztay rahien...  Applause Applause

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«Reply #28 on: November 12, 2008, 08:47:44 PM »
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Hamesha ki tarah, bahoot khoob Netra ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #29 on: November 12, 2008, 09:01:07 PM »
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pooja ji aap nay bohat munasib girah lagai hay... acha kaha aap nay...  Applause
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