Woh dikhte hue chhupe haalat !

by Ricky on September 08, 2008, 07:48:42 PM
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Sonia01
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«Reply #15 on: November 07, 2008, 06:54:03 AM »
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Something to share with my Yoindian friends .. not sure if worthy enough to share!

What you are going to see below can be of no sense but what I tried to write is a thing which is mostly not discussed. May be I misunderstood or may be people just don't want to talk about this or may be they see but still do not see or may be for some its not even there. Here I tried to put together few lines talking about a girl who is now an adult but being older means many things. Read it on and find out.

Jawaan aurat main bani,
yeh tan, yeh dheh kaya aisi nikhari..
Ki jaa ke kahan mein chippu,
Sankuchai si ki kaise teer drashti se bachun,
Mano mera tan nagn,
Kaise  swem ko surakshit mein rakhun?
Geedar samaan jaise mujhe woh ankhon se nochen..
Kya maine kiya koi apraadh..
Kyun mein iss apraadhbodh sang jeevan rachun?
Jo bachpan beeta laga mujhe
Ab nayi srashti mere angne pankh phelayegi..
Par maalum naa tha ki krur satya bhi saath layegi
Jaise lage ki har pal ek yudh ho
Aur nayan mere Yoddha evam
Har uss totalti drashti ke wo virudhh ho
Yeh kaisi vyatha ghir aayi
Abhi toh bachpan langha ..fir
Kyun ankahi duvidha maine payi
Kya mein Jawaan Aurat mein bani …
Aur mujhpe ye dandaatmak karyewahi?Huh?Huh?


Its small one and real meaning lies in few lines. Its just not about grown up girl who find herself unsafe but its about every growing and grown up girls who gets conscious about every person looking at them as if everyone is trying to see through their body..May be some people are there who do so but not everyone.

Its really a minor thing but do we really need to ignore it ?

Lastly, do give your views about my views. Negative and positive.. everything is invited. And if I misunderstood or misrepresented anything here then please correct me and also forgive me  if it caused inconvenience.


~Ricky

acha likha hai ricky ji but...
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #16 on: November 07, 2008, 07:11:21 AM »
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Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Ricky Ji
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«Reply #17 on: November 09, 2008, 04:46:52 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Ricky ji  .. Thumbs UP

Very nice reply Pooja... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2010, 10:14:01 AM »
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Wah wah Ricky ji,dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.bahut sachai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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