aaj ham ayesa kuch kar jaye

by hameeda on April 20, 2010, 11:22:50 PM
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as salamu ale kum
bibbo

aaj ham ayesa kuch kar jaye
rasme dunia se chal kahi jaye
tere kandhe pe rakh ke sar apna
sari duni ko ham bhula jaye
chal kahi aeyse des ham jaye
jis jagha piyar ho mohabbat ho
koi nafrat na shikayat ho jhan
har taraf phool ho bharei hon
door tak ham jhan nazar dale
piyar palta ho piyar basra ho
na koi gerr na koi  praya  ho
har taraf insaniyat ka pehra  ho
koi na jhut na koi dehshat
piyar hi piyar ki  wo dunia ho
ik duj je ko sab lgayen galle
na kisi ko kisi se dehshat ho
har zaban par sirf allah ho
har zaban par phla kalma ho
jo khuda ne kha sabhi se he
pehle insaniyat ka chehra  ho
har labbon par khi lee tabbassum ho
har kisi dil me quran basta ho
ik ho kar rhei  sabbi bhai
chahe hinndu ho ya musalma ho
piyar ki har taraf sune boli
beti babbul ki hon sabbhi bholli
biwi hon nek dil sabhi ki jhan
maa bhi sab ko piyar deti ho
bhai bhnon pe jan dete  ho
bhne sirf bhai ko  piyar karti ho
mal dolat ki na rahe chahat
sirf  insanniyat ki  qimat ho
ya khuda tu bnade aesa jahan
jis me bas piyar.piyar palta ho
karle .bibbo. kidua ye qabool
har taraf fir to  jannate nazaara ho
 
apna khyal rkhna
 
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 04:32:42 AM »
Bahut khoob Hameeda ji,very beautiful creation icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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riyaz106
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 11:22:34 AM »
Walekum Assalam Hameeda Ji.Achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Ismi ek khoobsurat duniya ka tasavvur aur khwab hai. Allah kare ye khwab pura ho jaaye. Lekin ye lines kuchh ajeeb hain:

maa bhi sab ko piyar deti ho (wo to apne sabhi bachho ko pyar deti hi hai)
bhne sirf bhai ko  piyar karti ho(Sirf bhai se hi kyon apne maa-baap, bhai, bahan se kyon nahi)
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 02:30:52 PM »
Bahut khoob Hameeda ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 02:34:27 PM »
Bahut achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Hameeda Ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2011, 12:06:38 PM »
hi
aaj ke door mei pyaar se zyaada pese se pyaar dekhagaya he.. behnei ..bhai ..maan ..paab aap ke paas pesa nahi hei to pyaar bhi nahi miltaa sab jhagda pese shuru or pese pe khatm jis ki bhi kahaani sunenge....shukriya ji..
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