~~Souvanik's Collection -->Bhalobasa~~

by bhambra on February 06, 2006, 05:40:23 AM
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bhambra
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«Reply #60 on: April 06, 2006, 03:56:25 PM »
Thanx Buddy......Sorry i am late in posting.... Usual Smile

U r welcome Anon to this zone....i will like to see more from u....nice starting... :wink:
Now one from me....I dont know if u will like it, coz isme koi lay nahi hay....

Akbar chokh Kholo

Tumi e prithibite thakar jogya nou,
E prithibi boroi kothor,boroi nishthur,
Tomar oi kaancher moto apolka mon k era nirdidhay bhenge dite paare,
Bhenge churmar kore dite paare tomar biswas,tomar swapno k,

Tumi sobai k sorol mone aapon kore nite chaile,
Akbaaro bhable na je se kamon,ki baa taar iccha,
Aadou taar saathe tomar moner mil royeche kina?
Tumi sudhu prem ditei sikhle,porer bhaloi chaile,
Ak poloker jonyo bhebe dekhle na tumi ki choao,tomar mon ki chai?

Nijer Saartho tuku akbaaro bhable na,bhabte chaile na,
Paagoler moto sobar modhye sudhu bhaloi khujhle,
Taader moner kaalo diktaake dekhte chaile na,
Je ja bollo,ja chailo,Tumi taai kore galey,
Akbaaro bujhle na je tumi koto joner mon bhenge dile?

Kintu akbaar, akbaar tumi chokh kholo,
Cheye dakho ei prithibi-te shudhu aalo noy,aandharo aache,
Koto rong mishe royeche ei Andhokarer buke,
Akbaar, akbaar antoto moner kotha sono,
Akbaar bhebe dakho je tumi ja paachho,tai ki tumi cheyechile?

Jedin er uttor tumi moner kaache paabe,
Jaanbe, ekti chele aajo tomar aopekkhaye aache||


Now plz koi issey jaldi se translate kar do....warna mujhe hi karna parega? :wink:
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mili_genie
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«Reply #61 on: April 18, 2006, 11:15:17 AM »
wah kya baat hai .... dada......Puzzled !

ek baat hai samjha kuch bhi nahi fir bhi.... sirf ek hi samjh aaya aur wo bole to... akbar badashah ka naam..... kyu sahi kaha na...Puzzled !
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bhambra
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«Reply #62 on: April 19, 2006, 04:50:14 PM »
Abey ohh badshaa kahan se aa gaya...lollzzyaar mere poem ki dhajjiyan udha diya tumne...ha ha
Actually koi yahan mera poems parta hu nahi na... sad5 isiliye translate nahi kiya...but tere liye sure karunga...par ke batana kaisa laga?? Usual Smile

Thanx tumne dekha to sahi...
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bybh
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«Reply #63 on: April 22, 2006, 12:31:17 PM »
Hey bhambra... I also see your poems... N eagerly wait 4 d translation...

Can u post some bengali SMS's too.... Plz its a request....
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bhambra
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«Reply #64 on: April 24, 2006, 04:10:03 PM »
Quote from: "bhambra"

[you]Akbar chokh Kholo[/you][/color]

Tumi e prithibite thakar jogya nou,
E prithibi boroi kothor,boroi nishthur,
Tomar oi kaancher moto apolka mon k era nirdidhay bhenge dite paare,
Bhenge churmar kore dite paare tomar biswas,tomar swapno k,

Tumi sobai k sorol mone aapon kore nite chaile,
Akbaaro bhable na je se kamon,ki baa taar iccha,
Aadou taar saathe tomar moner mil royeche kina?
Tumi sudhu prem ditei sikhle,porer bhaloi chaile,
Ak poloker jonyo bhebe dekhle na tumi ki choao,tomar mon ki chai?

Nijer Saartho tuku akbaaro bhable na,bhabte chaile na,
Paagoler moto sobar modhye sudhu bhaloi khujhle,
Taader moner kaalo diktaake dekhte chaile na,
Je ja bollo,ja chailo,Tumi taai kore galey,
Akbaaro bujhle na je tumi koto joner mon bhenge dile?

Kintu akbaar, akbaar tumi chokh kholo,
Cheye dakho ei prithibi-te shudhu aalo noy,aandharo aache,
Koto rong mishe royeche ei Andhokarer buke,
Akbaar, akbaar antoto moner kotha sono,
Akbaar bhebe dakho je tumi ja paachho,tai ki tumi cheyechile?

Jedin er uttor tumi moner kaache paabe,
Jaanbe, ekti chele aajo tomar aopekkhaye aache||



Aab jaago


Yeh Duniya tumhare layak nahi hay,
Yeh duniya bahot hi kathin hay,
Tumhari kaanch k jaise naajuk mann ko yeh log kabhi bhi todh sakte hay,
Tumhari har sapna har chahat ko yeh log todh sakte hay.

Tumne sabko hamesha apna mana,
Kabhi yeh nahi socha k woh kaisa hay,uska iraada kya hay?
Sirf pyaar dete gayi,dusro ka bhala karti gayi,
Kabhi bhi yeh nahi socha k tum kya chahti ho?

Kabhi apne liye nahi socha,koshis hi nahi ki,
Pagalon ki tarha Sabme sirf acchai khojti rahi,
Sabki Maan ki ujaalon ko dekh liya,andhera dikhai nahi diya,
Kabhi apne maan se yeh nahi pucha k woh kya chahti hay?
Jisne tumse jo manga tumne bina soche de diya,
Kabhi nahi samjhi k tumne anjaane me kitnoki dil todh diya..

Par aab ekbaar jaag jaao,apni aakhen kholo,
Dekho iss dharti pe ujala k saath saath andhera bhi hay,
Bahot saare rang mila hua hay iss andhere me,
Aab tum ekbaar apne maan  pucho,
Pucho Tumne aabtak jo paaya kya wahi tum chahti thi?

Jab tumhe is sawal ka jawab mil jayega,
Dekhogi tumhare intezaar me aaj bhi koi din bita raha hay...


With Love....SOUVANIK....

Plz send ur reply...)Sorry my hindi is not very good...par i hope aapko concept samajh me aa jayega... sad5
Bybh sure i will try to post some bengali sms...Till then u can use my short poems...(Jo maine start me post kiya tha)
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bybh
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«Reply #65 on: April 25, 2006, 12:33:20 PM »
Nice buddy... Thanks 4 translation... Bahut achi hai poem...

Haan, I'll b waitin 4 d SMS's dear... Ek choti si request hai... Saath hi me thoda rough translation kar dena...
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bhambra
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«Reply #66 on: April 25, 2006, 04:59:34 PM »
Thanx buddy...chalo koi to dekha... Usual Smile

For u....Bybh

Jeebone bondhu hoy to paabe aaro,
Tobu jano bhule jeo na aamake,
Tomay diyei shuru jeebon amar,
Sesh-o amar tomate.

Translate:

Zindegi me dost sayad aur bhi milenge,
Phir bhi mujhe bhul na jana dost,
Tumse hi meri zindegi shuru hoti hay,
Aur khatam bhi tumhi se.
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bybh
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«Reply #67 on: April 27, 2006, 04:36:06 AM »
1derful bhambra... Thankx for translating it too....

Waitin 4 more...
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bhambra
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«Reply #68 on: May 02, 2006, 05:21:50 PM »
Bondhu bole dekechi jakhon,
Saathi hoye pauth cholbo takhon,
Amaay tumi bhule jete paaro akdin,
Tomay bhulbe na, jeno amar e mon.

Translation :

Jab tumhe maine dost mana hay,
Saath chalne ki kasam khaaya hay,
Bhul bhi jaao tum kabhi mujhe,
Tumhe bhul pana, Namumkeen hay.
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bybh
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«Reply #69 on: May 03, 2006, 01:24:39 PM »
Superb 1... Ek dum jhakaas... Thanks for postin n keep postin...
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #70 on: June 19, 2006, 03:20:49 AM »
Thread ta eto thanda keno bhambra..lekho kichu
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #71 on: June 19, 2006, 07:56:25 PM »
Quote from: "bhambra"
Thanx Buddy......Sorry i am late in posting.... Usual Smile

you r welcome Anon to this zone....i will like to see more from you....nice starting... :wink:
Now one from me....I dont know if you will like it, coz isme koi lay nahi hay....

[you]Akbar chokh Kholo[/you][/color]

Tumi e prithibite thakar jogya nou,
E prithibi boroi kothor,boroi nishthur,
Tomar oi kaancher moto apolka mon k era nirdidhay bhenge dite paare,
Bhenge churmar kore dite paare tomar biswas,tomar swapno k,

Tumi sobai k sorol mone aapon kore nite chaile,
Akbaaro bhable na je se kamon,ki baa taar iccha,
Aadou taar saathe tomar moner mil royeche kina?
Tumi sudhu prem ditei sikhle,porer bhaloi chaile,
Ak poloker jonyo bhebe dekhle na tumi ki choao,tomar mon ki chai?

Nijer Saartho tuku akbaaro bhable na,bhabte chaile na,
Paagoler moto sobar modhye sudhu bhaloi khujhle,
Taader moner kaalo diktaake dekhte chaile na,
Je ja bollo,ja chailo,Tumi taai kore galey,
Akbaaro bujhle na je tumi koto joner mon bhenge dile?

Kintu akbaar, akbaar tumi chokh kholo,
Cheye dakho ei prithibi-te shudhu aalo noy,aandharo aache,
Koto rong mishe royeche ei Andhokarer buke,
Akbaar, akbaar antoto moner kotha sono,
Akbaar bhebe dakho je tumi ja paachho,tai ki tumi cheyechile?

Jedin er uttor tumi moner kaache paabe,
Jaanbe, ekti chele aajo tomar aopekkhaye aache||


Now plz koi issey jaldi se translate kar do....warna mujhe hi karna parega? :wink:


Khubii sundor lekha hoyeche bhambra dada!!!!!!!!!!! ,aasha korbo nitto notun dine aaro sundor sundor kobita r chora pabo aapnar kach theke!
Aamar torof theke onek subhechcha roilo aap nar jonno :D

keu ek jon likhe chilo aami seta shear korlam

Ekhhuni Vhalobsha
Ekhhuni nei
Aadhonik Shomoy ar
Vhalobasha ei
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #72 on: June 19, 2006, 07:58:58 PM »
Thik hii bolecho RWG..Shob adhunik bhalobhasha cholche guru..
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #73 on: June 19, 2006, 08:31:12 PM »
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Thik hii bolecho RWG..Shob adhunik bhalobhasha cholche guru..

Hahaha ...tahole aami thik e!!!,but SD dada tumio to daroon bangla bolte paaro dekhchi :D ..tahole tumio kichu post koro na aaeikhane!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #74 on: June 20, 2006, 02:49:13 AM »
RWG guru, bangali manush ami...bangla pari kintu ami toh din raat urdu r hindi te shayari likhte thakhi...cheshta nischoi korbo, bhai...Souvanik da lekho kichu...
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