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« on: July 28, 2006, 05:12:58 AM »

Dear All,
Pooja, Nikki, Redandwhitegang and ................... I cannot write all of your names but want you all to know that each one of you is a gem of poet and writer.
I dont understand from where these feelings come from. Do you people write from your experience or is this all your imagination!!
Whatever it is, each one is a masterpiece.
Personally this site is a great place of solace for me. So many times the writings of you all has kept balanced and sane.
Sometimes I feel to open up my life to you all and want to see your reactions to it. May be someday.

I pray for each one of you and want to bless one and all....

KEEP UP THE PASSION.

One of the many admirers that you all have.......

jahangir_s@hotmail.com


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« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2006, 11:17:22 AM »

MR.JAHANGIR.....I will like to know about u and yours life...of course all the feelings comes from our life.the lines totally reflects our personality.and also there is imagination too....but one can imagine only if his/her life reflects the imagination to the feelings....tell me about your self.im mwaiting for urs answer.....

urs
GUMNAM
THE UNKNOWN PERSONALITY


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EK GALAT KADAM UTHA THA RAAH-E-ISHQ MEIN,MANZIL TAMAM UMRA MUJHE DHUDHATI RAHI.

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« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2006, 06:17:48 PM »

I truly n totaly agree wiv GumnamJi, Mr Jahangir i wud Love 2 hear ur story n share myn wiv u, n evrytin i ryt is my experienc at yung age bt my poems r nt as gd as da gr8s on here, u cn tke me 4 a learner bt im often a matchmaker n advicer so yes definately share ur story wiv us cz nw we'v formed a bond, Bond of Friendship n Love!

Look 4wrd 2 hearin frm u!

With Best Wishes... Ravi!


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Main waqt ke ishaare chalta rehta hoon,
Jo hain zindagi dariyaa aur hum ek kashti, saamne phir kyun dhuaan paata hoon,

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« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2006, 04:58:52 AM »

Mr. jahangir,

jo bhi hum likhte hai wo humare sath gujra hai agar aapke saath kuch beeta hai to usay hi aapne sabdo mein piroker kavita ka roop do. wo kavita ka saacha roop hai ya pir jo dekhte ho us jagah khud ko mehsoosh karo. wo kavi satya hota hai (poets truely eye) kavitayen pado jis say naye naye vichar aayenge.

bhagwaan aapk safalta ke sikhar tak pahuchaye.
bhondu
(ek bewakoof)


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« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2006, 09:22:43 AM »

Well...moving it to Chit Chat section !!

This section is meant exclusively for poetry !!

Moved by Yoindia Monitor Talat !


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« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2006, 11:49:19 AM »

thank u so much Jahangir ji for appreciating my work. Actually to be very frank I could not even write a single sher before coming here, I had learned a lot from ppl here on yoindia.Yes as all others mentioned we do write with feelings, thoughts n some imaginations.

would like to explain in my way...

thoda sa dard, thodi si dawa
thoda sa pyar, thodi si uski saza
kuch halaat majboor karte hain likhne ke liye
kuch aadat se mazboor hain hum
kabhi koi humein jaanta nahi tha
magar dekhiye aap jaise pyar karne wale kadardaano ki wajah se kitne mash_hoor hain hum

one more...

dekhiye likhne ke liye dil mein pyar hona zaroori hai
jab pyar hoga to dard bhi khud hi aa jayega
jab dil mein udasi ki shama jalegi to kalam bhi chalegi..khud ba khud
na sochna padega ek pal ke liye
aise aise sher likhne lagenge ke kamaal ho jayega
aap shayar ban jayenge aur yoindia pe dhamaal ho jayega

all the best ji...


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« Reply #6 on: August 01, 2006, 04:11:58 AM »

very nicely wrapped by NIKKI ......

quite correct when you have felt some thing when u lived something when u had something in you which you know is missig now. When you really want to share yourself, Then u write your heart out.

in otehr words

thoda sa payar hua hai thoda ha baaki

ya phir

Jaam aur abhi peene do ke yaad abhi baki hai....

ya phir

koi humdum koi sahara na raha......

ya phi yun kahiye

mere naseeb mai aye dost tera payar nahi...

ya ek aur.

sohne dildara tere payar ko mai wariyan
meriya duawan tenu lag jan sarriyannnn....

ya....

tu waqt hai mere liye
mai hun tera lamha.......

sahayad kuch smjha paya hun.....

bye tk care - vikas


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kisi ki dhundhli si tasveer
koi simti se yaad
ansoonon ka saath
aur kuch nai
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Kush rehne ki dau na do doston
ke aankhe ab nam nahi hoti meri

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Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2006, 04:10:17 AM »

mere dosto ne aapko kitne acache se samajaya
yeh hai khel lafazo ka kuch aapko samjh mein aaya

jab bhi koi bhav umade dil mein usko lafazo mein dhaalo
aur apne in sunder lafazo ki ek sunder si ghazal bana lo

dil se nilke yahi bhav ek kavitaa ban jaayenge
aur tumhare dil ke har sukh dukh ko yeh dhal jaayenge

geeto ka yeh sunder sansaar aise hi toh racha hai
jisne isko jaan liya woh hi kavi bana hai

asha hai ki ab aap yeh baat samjh jaayenge
aur apne sundar lafazo ko saja ke roz naYi nazm hame sunayenge

fir bhi aapko samajh na aaya toh hum dost aapke kaam aayenge
aur apne lambe lectures se fir aapko bore kar jaayenge.... :lol: :D


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Hands of emotions join to form eternal thoughts…
these eternal thoughts, give rise to poetry as innocent as a child !

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« Reply #8 on: August 04, 2006, 02:25:20 AM »

bahut aachi tarah se sab samjha rahe hai aapko.
nikalo aapne us ander ke kavi ko ye jaga rahe hai aapko.
ek kavi hai jo samaaj ko tol sakta hai.
aapni kavita ke maadhyam se usay ujagar ker sakta hai bol sakta hai.


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« Reply #9 on: August 04, 2006, 08:38:37 AM »

Bahut khoob sab ne bade aache se likha... hume bhi shika do :|


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b]Khuda Ke pass ek wada kar aaye,
Jaldi marne ka faisla kar aaye,
Meri Pheli aur Akhir Mohabbat aap hi ho 'Jaan'
Janat Mein saath rehna ka wada kar aaye.[/b]

Agr Dunya k Azmat ko Gawara kardya hota
Najane ktne sajdo k Qazara karlya hota.
tumari bewafai m yuhi tadapkar marte Nhi,
Agar milne se phle IstiQara karlya hota.

Is duniya mein sab kuchh bikta hai,
phir judai hi rishwat kyun nahi leti,
Marta nahi hai koi kisi se juda hokar,
Bus yaadein hi hai jo jeene nahi deti.

Mohabbat ke imtehan mein humne apni jaan ki bazi lagayi,
wafa ke badle mein humne bewafayi inaam mein hai paayi.

Kya Sunayein Kisi Ko Raaz-e-Dil,
Dard Bhi Badhta Hai Sunane Se.

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