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Shyama,

What's your age?
You must be a school going child.

Your post should spell like this :

To you, belongs my life, my dreams are yours too.
My heart beats to hear your name, my smile is just for you.
In my thoughts, in my soul, none else but you.
As long as I live it's true, I'll always love you.

Use proper punctuation marks, where needed, and do not forget to capitalize the 'i'.

Good day to you, Madam.

sandeepparker,

I can also do this, OO

There are some mistakes in your poem too, that need to be revised.

You didn't end your poem with a full stop '.'

It is still looking, as if it is incomplete.
If it is incomplete, you should mention it in your post.

Good day to you, Sir.

Pandit,

This thread is not meant for chatting.
You are a retard.
Post love poetry here, do not chit chat or just drop by to say a 'Hi!'

Your post should look something like this :

Hi! everyone.
How are all of you?

You school going child!
Go and do your homework.
Shoooooooo

Hi cutepriya_delhi

aap sab ko kyon daante hein?

Yahaan par aggar puctuation theek na bhi ho to kya hai???

Hum log to shayar hai madam, english teachers nahin!!!!!

                                     

i will always love you
HUM TUMHEIN ZINDGI BHAR CHAHEIN GAY MERI JAAN
YEHI DIL NEY QSAM KHA RKHI HAI

YEH DO PAL KA AIK BANDHAN HAI SUNAM
IS KO AN TOROO YOUN HRJAI SUNAM

ITNA TU SABR KR LO MERI JAAN
2 PAL KA SAFR HAI BAQI

very  shayma,  priya...........sandeep  boss :lol:

plz  aap  log  jhagda  mat  karen.........  &  chat  bhi na karen..........

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