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Tosha

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« on: February 22, 2006, 09:02:51 AM »

The moment I open your box
I see my life changed you know
Feels like there’s only me n you
Sharing our lives
Your toys
Your letters
All the creative stuff
They decorate my life
Makes me colorful
I’ll be plain without you
Missing you in front of me

I’ll make it
I’ll steal you away from you
I’ll make you mine
I promise
We’ll make it for sure
I’m determent
We will live a brand new life

Sorry! Watching you after a long time
I can’t stop crying
I love you
You are my desire
My dream
My destiny
I’ll bear anything for you
I’m ready
I’m prepared

My wishes
My ecstasy
My love
All I share with you
All is worth when you say
You love me too
Life is beautiful with you
Be careful my love

Let life be an open road
That we can run anywhere
We want to
Don’t be tied
Be free
To fly with no worries
Work hard
Get the best
God’s with us


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« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2006, 02:29:13 AM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

The moment I open your box
I’ll make it
I’ll steal you away from you
I’ll make you mine
I promise
We’ll make it for sure
I’m determent
We will live a brand new life

Great Work Tosha ji..
What i really liiked about the poem is the determination shown by the words quoted above..
they show how badly you can love someone..and also your positive attitude towards your life..!
Later in the poem you mention that God's with you..and that's true as well because even if we can't see Him..we still can feel that some kind of force is with us all the time who helps us when we are right and determined..

Just be Happy..Be positive and live life to the fullest!


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Tosha

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« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2006, 04:12:18 AM »

Hmmm... thanx for your review .... and comments.

well it does show the determination in love.

i'll tell a lil secret about this poem after i get satisfactory no of replies ...


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