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Celmira

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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #15 on: October 18, 2008, 01:21:57 AM »

Bilkul,

Ye section banaya hi isiliye gaya hai taaki yahan positive criticism se mere jaise logon (jo sirf shuq ki wajah se likhte hain; kahin seekha ya ta'aleem nahin li hai) unhe faaida ho....

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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #16 on: March 06, 2009, 08:58:06 AM »

well done


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Celmira

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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #17 on: March 25, 2009, 04:48:17 AM »

Thanks


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Azeem

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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #18 on: April 20, 2009, 11:47:25 AM »

Waah Talat Behna, Kya Khoob Yaar,.


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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #19 on: May 02, 2009, 10:35:51 AM »

Bhoooooooooooooooot achhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa laga


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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #20 on: May 26, 2009, 04:32:23 PM »

Thanks, Azeem, Raj


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Re: Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

« Reply #21 on: June 27, 2009, 03:39:20 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 11, 2006, 02:11:17 PM

Phoolon ke daaman main chupe hote hain kaante
Muskurahat jaane kitni saazishon ko hai chupaye
Dost ban kar dagha deta aaya hai yeh zamana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Sheeshe ko bhala pathar hum banaye bhi kaise
Aankhon main utre dard ko chupaye bhi kaise
Mushkil hai ek pal marna ek pal jiye jaana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Rooh tak utri hai jo najaane kaisi yeh thakan hai
Koi nahin apna har shakhs khud main magan hai
Laut kar wapis jahan se na kabhi hai aana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Woh ek des titliyon ka woh taaron ki ek nagri
Ab tak jise chup chup kar dekha kiya humne
Khwabon ki us nagri se pariyon ko hai aana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

bAHUT KHOOB DR SAHIBA