-----Immortal love-----

by urs4evasomdev on February 21, 2006, 01:47:42 PM
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sunny_bunny
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«Reply #15 on: March 13, 2006, 10:17:32 AM »
OMG.............minu u r amazing honey............he is really very lucky guy.
love u and ur poem too.......!
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urs4evasomdev
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«Reply #16 on: March 13, 2006, 12:05:50 PM »
Thank you sunny!
for loving my poem and meeeeeeeeeeeeee

hey dat guy is not lucky man!
I AM! TO HAVE HIM SO FAR AND YET so close!
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roshni246
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«Reply #17 on: September 22, 2006, 07:15:25 PM »
Quote from: "urs4evasomdev"
Those killer instincts that a woman can die for,
That caring attitude a woman can cry for,
you have the sweet tender touch a woman can lie for,
you have the perfect smile a woman cannot say goodbye to,

Whenever I wake up seeing you beside me,
I feel the warmth and security & become the happiest woman alive,
When I feel the touch of your arms around me,
As if a python with its strength, not letting go of its prey,

Its crazy how I feel eccentric when you stare at me with ur eyes,
Like I’m standing on top of a high mountain and experiencing its serenity,
And we have been too strong for too long,
Now it seems impossible to be without you baby,

The intermittent looks of your sweet but bewildering smerk,
Makes me touch the 7th heaven and never return to earth,
Every night when ur late,
Ill be waking up until you get home,

Whoever’s there loving someone, who knows just how I feel,
Too hard to fake it, and nothing can replace it,
The connection of twins is how I feel with you sometimes,
Its crazy how feelings can be so replicated for times indefinite,

I know my words are not enough to show how I feel,
I know my love is not enough to thank you enough,
And you will forget that there was ever a girl who loved you as I do,
Maybe everlasting is not what our love is meant to be,

But immortal is my love, affection and passion for you,
And deep down you know that our love is true……


I wud love to see the reviews for the poem and accept all the criticsm!



wow this is called true love honey,....im impressed....relli...u made me cry sad5 not fair minuuuuuuuu..............bohot ache.....u both r made ffor each other honey....may god bless ur love and ur relation...mwahhhh!!!
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urs4evasomdev
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«Reply #18 on: October 13, 2006, 01:39:53 PM »
jaan thanx so much!
i dont know whether this is true love or not.......... but for my own sake.......... i very well hope so!

May God bless!
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