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« on: July 18, 2006, 10:36:19 AM »

kah kar payaar, wo sawarth ki rishta bana baithe
hum apne sawarth mai, unki her jaffa bhulla baithe

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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2006, 01:27:36 PM »

Pooja Di..Sach mey dil sey likha sher hai yeh...

I m trying to elaborate it this way....Hope I m right

It seems, the poetess want to express the love in her heart for the person who only want her for some reason..

The lover (guy) must have expressed his love for the poetess, but infact he did not love her..and just want to win her to fulfill his earthy desires...

On the other hand, The girl (poetess) is in true love with the guy and wanted to live with him; so she remains silent, even when she knows the fact that the guy did not love her and just wanted to get her so that he can fulfill his desires only.....

Hope I have done it.......


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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2006, 03:36:20 AM »

ek ek shabad sahi likha hai Shikha... jaise mera dil pad liya ho apne...

Shukaria .......


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« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2006, 02:12:16 AM »

The Poetess feels that the person she is in love with has actually diverted the true love into material love ... but the poetess still loves the person with oll her heart.

I'v tried ... though i don't know the meaning of swarath.

But i'd like to add ... after reading the explaination by Shikha Di... it felt like the share has been written for me. I'v learnt a new word .... Swarath Winking


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« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2006, 02:58:33 PM »

I agree with Shikha12-Ji interpretation and would like to add further:

"Even after knowing her lover intentions, she not only forgives him but also she is still in love with him"

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« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2006, 12:53:58 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

kah kar payaar, wo sawarth ki rishta bana baithe
hum apne sawarth mai, unki her jaffa bhulla baithe

I agree with Shikha... Pooja Sis bohat gehri baat kahi hai

Its all about love... Is shair me yeh zahir ho raha hai k us ka Premi pyar ki aad me apna swarth dekh raha hai ... woh yeh baat jaanti hai fir bhi woh usey itna chahti hai ke us ki har galti bhool kar us se pyar karti hai ...
In her view the important thing is she loves him...


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