~~~ ... Tere Bin Har Rang Phika Lagta Hai ... ~~~

[Tosha]

teri yeh mayusi meri bechaini ban jaati hai
zindgi se tera khafa hona, meri zindgi ka khafa hona hai
teri saason se main khud saas leti hun
tera yeh udaas chera, mejhe apni haar sa lagta hai

mere liye kya chan kya suraj kya tare
tu saath ho to sab laghe hai apne pyare
par tu rutha hai iskadar khud se hi
mujhe mitane ko aaya tufan sa lagta hai

teri hasi pe ghayal hue the, nirali teri har ada
teri mohabbat ko aapna samajh jee rahe the
tu aab na jaa chod ke, na ho hujhse juda
laut ke aaja, aaja, tere bin har rang phika lagta hai

[tanha dil tanha safar]

teri yeh mayusi meri bechaini ban jaati hai
zindgi se tera khafa hona, meri zindgi ka khafa hona hai
teri saason se main khud saas leti hun
tera yeh udaas chera, mejhe apni haar sa lagta hai

mere liye kya chan kya suraj kya tare
tu saath ho to sab laghe hai apne pyare
par tu rutha hai iskadar khud se hi
mujhe mitane ko aaya tufan sa lagta hai

teri hasi pe ghayal hue the, nirali teri har ada
teri mohabbat ko aapna samajh jee rahe the
tu aab na jaa chod ke, na ho hujhse juda
laut ke aaja, aaja, tere bin har rang phika lagta hai

hai raat andheri itni aur meri to subah bhi inti andheri hai
iss subah ka to suraj bhi ab phika lagta hai
na bhar sakta hai iss khali dunia ko koi meri
iska to ab har rang he phika lagta hai.........

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[Pooja]

yaha per shayra apni bhawnaye bayan kar rahi hai uske liye, jo uski zindagi mai bahoot mahtavpuran sathan rakhta hai!!

<Shayra uski udaasig nahi dekhsakti aor uski mausi wo khud preshan ho jaati hai, jis tarah se wo zindagi se khafa hota najar atta hai, shayra ko lagt ahai jaise uski zindagi khafa ho gai hai, wo agar khush hai tabhi shayra khush hai. (teri saason se main khud saas leti hun)>

teri yeh mayusi meri bechaini ban jaati hai
zindgi se tera khafa hona, meri zindgi ka khafa hona hai
teri saason se main khud saas leti hun
tera yeh udaas chera, mejhe apni haar sa lagta hai

<yaha per shayra bayan kar rahi hai ki uske bina koi bhi khushi achi nahi lagati, agar wo sath hai tabhi chand taare uske liye koi mayne rakhty hai, yaha chand taaro ko wo sari khushiyon se jod rahi hai. uske ruth jaane se shayra bahoot dukhi hai aor usko lagta hai ki yah dard usko mitta dega>

mere liye kya chan kya suraj kya tare
tu saath ho to sab laghe hai apne pyare
par tu rutha hai iskadar khud se hi
mujhe mitane ko aaya tufan sa lagta hai

<yaha per shayar uski baato ko yaad karty hui bayan kar rahi hai ki uski hansi per wo fida thi aor uski her baat hi ek ada thi jo ki bahoot nirali thi, uski muhobaat ke sir per hi wo zindagi jee rahi thi, wo binati kar rahi hai ki usko chod kar wo na jaaye aor usse juda na ho>

teri hasi pe ghayal hue the, nirali teri har ada
teri mohabbat ko aapna samajh jee rahe the
tu aab na jaa chod ke, na ho hujhse juda
laut ke aaja, aaja, tere bin har rang phika lagta hai
..
..

Hello Tosha, maine apki kavita apni najar se pad kar yaha per yah sab likha hai, asha hai ki apko jayda nirash nahi kiya hoga!!!

Edited By: Tosha
Action : Made the poem bold.
Reason : It was difficult to make out the poem and the explaination.

[Tosha]

OMG !!!

main to aise hun ki khud likh ke bhool jati hun ke maine kuch likha bhi tha kabhi.
aur baad main jab padti hun to yakeen nahihota ki maine hi likha tha na :D

well ... aap ne bahut ki khoob explain kiya hai iss shayari ko.

amazing ... dono the SHAYARA aur explain kerne wali SHAYARA

[tanha dil tanha safar]

explaination mein dum hai....

[Azeem Azaad]

Bahoot Ache Doston,..

[Saba_Saba]

Very nice Poem Toshu.... Mai kuchh try karti hu samajhne ki
Yeh kavita ek shikwa sa lagti hai .. jo kavitri apne premi se kar rahi hai ... woh apna pyar jata rahi hai aur us ka premi apne me magan hai ....

teri yeh mayusi meri bechaini ban jaati hai
zindgi se tera khafa hona, meri zindgi ka khafa hona hai
teri saason se main khud saas leti hun
tera yeh udaas chera, mejhe apni haar sa lagta hai

In lines me  Premi to mayus dikhaya hai ... aur us par kavitri ki pratikriya kya hoti hai ... woh usey is tarah dekh kar bohat bechain aur pareshan ho jati hai aur us ki himmat bandhati hai. Woh usey kehti hai ke woh us ke sath hai aur us ki jeet me kavitri ki jeet aur haar me haar hai ...

mere liye kya chand kya suraj kya tare
tu saath ho to sab laghe hai apne pyare
par tu rutha hai iskadar khud se hi
mujhe mitane ko aaya tufan sa lagta hai

Yaha zahir ho raha hai k us ke premi k bina us k liye duniya ki kisi cheez kisi khushi ka koi matlab nahi ... us ki hansi us ke liye khas hai aur us ka roothne par kavitri ki jaan par ban aati hai ... aur ab jo woh khud se hi pareshan hai aur mayus hai ... yeh dekh kar usey mehsoos ho raha hai ke uski zindagi bhi bas mitne wali hai

teri hasi pe ghayal hue the, nirali teri har ada
teri mohabbat ko aapna samajh jee rahe the
tu aab na jaa chod ke, na ho mujhse juda
laut ke aaja, aaja, tere bin har rang phika lagta hai

Yaha sari situation change ho rahi hai ... Premi us se duur ho gaya/ho raha hai ... woh usey bula rahi hai aur keh rahi hai ke us ke bina woh jee na payegi ... uski mohabbat hi zindagi hai isliye woh na jaye ... us se duur na ho ....

hope mai theek samajh paayi hu ... Tosha if i made any mistake let me know

[Tosha]

nicly understood main explained Saba! Thanx

[Tosha]

तेरी एह मायूसी मेरी बेचैनी बन जाती है
ज़िंदगी से तेरा ख़फा होना, मेरी ज़िंदगी का ख़फा होना है
तेरी सासों से मैं ख़ुद सास लेती हूँ
तेरा एह उदास चेरा, मेझे अपनी हार सा लगता है

मेरे लिए क्या चाँद क्या सूरज क्या तारे
तू साथ हो तो सब लगते है अपने प्यारे
प्रर तू रूठा है इस्कदार ख़ुद से ही
मुझे मिटाने कोई आया तूफ़ान सा लगता है

तेरी हसीं पे घायल हुए थे, निराली तेरी ह्रर अदा
तेरी मोहब्बत को आपना समझ जी रहे थे
तू अब ना जा छोड़ के, ना हो मुझसे जुदाह
लौट के आजा, आजा, तेरे बीन हैर रंग फीका लगता है