Unhe dekhe ek jamana hua

by niraj_191 on March 01, 2006, 01:22:47 PM
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This is my first thougth after joining yoindia and it might not be intrested topic 4 u...

Unhe dekhe ek jamana hua
chalo isi bat pe band aaj se mai-khana hua
soch hi rahe the ki kitne mahino bad hamara hosh me aana hua
itne me to unka meri gali se jana hua
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2006, 02:32:14 PM »
niraj I think you should not say this is your own creation.  please be truthfull to yourself.

This is very old and I ghave read and also heard many times over.

I am very bad with names thus not able ot tell you the name of the poet. But still please take care in future.
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2006, 02:54:31 PM »
Neeraj, if its not your creation then kindly let us know. This section is specifically for original creation. Also You can't get review untill you have not give proper review to atleast 3 other poem in this section.

See this thread to know how things works here :
http://www.yoindia.com/forums/tumko-jo-baharo-mai-dekha-hota-example-thread-vt14898.html

This thread is locked , kindly let me know when I have to open it.

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The Thread is reopened NOW !
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