A Soldier

by harashmahajan on March 10, 2008, 02:58:32 AM
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A Soldier


I'll
come home soon.
wrote a cadet,
from an army troop.
she read the letter
sipping a tomato soup.
smelling some foul
threw her bowl.
she broke her bangles
and
began to cry,
screamed no! no!
he can't die.
she was upset
heart was blown
there was no one
to whom could shown.
deadly,deadly
like a stone,
the cadet really
came back home.
but in coffin with white sheet enfold.
this isn't the only
died in war,
there'r many
who became stars.
who'll tell the things to thee
whom is to bear
the only 'she'.
son was crying
the mom was weeping,
dad was saying
he made us proud
but
she was pathetically cursing
her soul in crowd.

~~~~*harash mahajan*~~~~
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2008, 05:15:19 AM »
A very heart touching poem harash ji.. Crying


Waiting for her loved on to return
She waits in agony and pain
Once she receives a note
Saying he would never see her in pain
Wonder what happen she lost him forever
And never saw him ever
Hoping that he would return she waits
As time never waited for her and she fades forever...
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2008, 05:35:23 AM »
Thanx Honey for your  kind words...A sympathatic view with your few lines are marvelous....God bless you dear.....
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2008, 12:28:25 PM »
Quote from: harashmahajan on March 10, 2008, 02:58:32 AM
A Soldier


I'll
come home soon.
wrote a cadet,
from an army troop.
she read the letter
sipping a tomato soup.
smelling some foul
threw her bowl.
she broke her bangles
and
began to cry,
screamed no! no!
he can't die.
she was upset
heart was blown
there was no one
to whom could shown.
deadly,deadly
like a stone,
the cadet really
came back home.
but in coffin with white sheet enfold.
this isn't the only
died in war,
there'r many
who became stars.
who'll tell the things to thee
whom is to bear
the only 'she'.
son was crying
the mom was weeping,
dad was saying
he made us proud
but
she was pathetically cursing
her soul in crowd.

~~~~*harash mahajan*~~~~


A short but hearttouching poem from the point view of soldier-widow. Very nice Harash Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2008, 01:56:40 PM »
Marvellous . Applause Each line touched my soul.
Harash ji... great work  icon_salut
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2008, 02:11:26 PM »
very touching n nice Harsh ji ..so good way to say feelings..i have no words to say more...
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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2008, 03:58:19 PM »
harsh ji kya baat hai
verry touching



Baadal
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2008, 05:34:50 PM »
Quote from: Talat on March 10, 2008, 12:28:25 PM
Quote from: harashmahajan on March 10, 2008, 02:58:32 AM
A Soldier


I'll
come home soon.
wrote a cadet,
from an army troop.
she read the letter
sipping a tomato soup.
smelling some foul
threw her bowl.
she broke her bangles
and
began to cry,
screamed no! no!
he can't die.
she was upset
heart was blown
there was no one
to whom could shown.
deadly,deadly
like a stone,
the cadet really
came back home.
but in coffin with white sheet enfold.
this isn't the only
died in war,
there'r many
who became stars.
who'll tell the things to thee
whom is to bear
the only 'she'.
son was crying
the mom was weeping,
dad was saying
he made us proud
but
she was pathetically cursing
her soul in crowd.

~~~~*harash mahajan*~~~~


A short but hearttouching poem from the point view of soldier-widow. Very nice Harash Applause


Thanx Talat ji...love to read the words to thr Credit of the poem
God bless you.....


harash
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #8 on: March 10, 2008, 05:37:04 PM »
yes Roja...you are the better Judge as  you belong to such family of soldiers.....Thx dear


Quote from: Roja on March 10, 2008, 01:56:40 PM
Marvellous . Applause Each line touched my soul.
Harash ji... great work  icon_salut
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2008, 05:38:39 PM »
Thanx Punam..love your words

Quote from: punam on March 10, 2008, 02:11:26 PM
very touching n nice Harsh ji ..so good way to say feelings..i have no words to say more...
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2008, 05:40:41 PM »
Thanks badal ji......you have touched the soul the poem too dear......

harash
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #11 on: March 11, 2008, 10:01:58 AM »

very good work,great read
really liked it
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #12 on: March 11, 2008, 05:58:19 PM »
Thx stranger for your kind words......
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