ailing evening

by ashish.sinha97 on June 20, 2012, 08:50:47 PM
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The beautiful evening was on her way,
But suddenly , she was in no mood to move away
She started crying ,and was begging.....
     it was the season of THE MAY.
Then the chirping sparrows
stared, glanced ,smiled.
They snogged, the evening cried hard,
but bosomed the little sparrows,
And then replied,
 "This is the night which
always comes in my way
and takes my love away".
The sparrows stared at each other.
The evening asked the sparrows to help her
And said that please take this letter
to my love.
And moved back to go away,
Before that ,she shed a tear and said
"I am missing you my dear morning........... "

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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2012, 09:03:27 PM »
u have described so beautifully !!
such a soothing poem

keep up d good work Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2012, 12:37:48 AM »
beautiful
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2012, 11:27:43 PM »
nice creation  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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