..All Over Again..:English

sanya310

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Cant believe its already been a year
that we've been toghether this way;
Wanna let you know sweetie
I'll love u more each passing day..

From the time you confessed your love for me
On the lovely 25th of May;
there've been butterflies fluttering in me
that just dont seem to go away..

Its amazing how after a year
our love still feels so new;
I spend my days and nights, wishing
I was right there in your arms with you..

Amazing how every love song
seems to be made for us alone;
and how baby you can turn me on
just by talking to me on the phone..

I so wish you were here with me
i badly long for your touch;
feelings i really cant verbalize
coz i just love u too much..

I miss being with you my love
Its really been quite a while;
since I've looked into your loving eyes
and have smiled back at your smile..

You've been with me through thick and thin
through the times when all seemed dark;
remembering this, rekindles my love
and ignites in me, a whole new spark..

And so baby, I wanna hug you tight
and dance with you in the pouring rain;
I wanna whisper in your ears, my love
that I'm falling for you..all over again..


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Ricky

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2008, 01:25:33 AM »

Very very expressive and well narrated. Though I feel my understanding of english poetry is limited but what you wrote is beautiful.
No one can deny that. Every stanza narrates its own story and no further explanation is required for any single word.

Good work Sanya..


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Rajbir

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2008, 02:01:50 AM »

Sani

Wow baby ! too good yaar Applause

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sanya310

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2008, 02:28:58 AM »

thank u so much Ricky..I'm really glad that u gave my work a detailed response and im happy that u liked it!!
by the way, where have u been! Usual Smile

thanx raj bhai.. Winking

hehe


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Talat

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2008, 02:37:22 AM »

Very beautiful poem...very good work Nobi Usual Smile


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sanya310

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2008, 02:38:54 AM »

thanx a lot Talat :D


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Ricky

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2008, 02:44:27 AM »

Quote from: sanya310 on September 09, 2008, 02:28:58 AM

thank u so much Ricky..I'm really glad that u gave my work a detailed response and im happy that u liked it!!
by the way, where have u been! Usual Smile

Thankyou Sanya that you liked my response. About me not being around.. its like Bass.. aaj ki raat I am here Usual Smile

Kal subah ki roshni fir wahi zindagi dohrayegi !
Kya hona ya naa hona, zindagi bass chalti hi jayegi !!!


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sanya310

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2008, 02:50:26 AM »

zindagi toh zindagi hai, chalti hi jayegi
chalte chalaate gaadi aage nikal jayegi
par karengey intezaar aapke ird-gird hone ka
aur sabhi ko aapki bohot yaad aayegi!


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Ricky

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2008, 02:57:01 AM »

Spare me for starting Hindi poetry here. I just remembered that its English poetry section.

And thankyou Sanya for those lines you wrote.

May the way I look sun tomorrow will change..
But for other people, it will remain same !


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honeyrose

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2008, 11:33:13 AM »

Wow very nice creation Sanya sis .. Applause

very nice lines Ricky ... Applause


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sanya310

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2008, 03:11:34 PM »

thanx honey sis!! <3
xx


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Shikha12

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2008, 04:04:14 PM »

Quote from: sanya310 on September 09, 2008, 12:59:50 AM

Beautiful Creation Sanya.. Applause

Very Creatively Compiled And Very Well Expressed...


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sanya310

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2008, 07:01:57 PM »

thanks a lot shikha di =) happy u liked it!


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Ishy

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #13 on: September 10, 2008, 10:22:22 AM »

hey..
nicly wrote..
i wish i could write that well tongue3


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NODER

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Re: ..All Over Again..

«Reply #14 on: September 10, 2008, 12:08:11 PM »

full of emotions some lines made me think abt me past sad7

nice creation Sani


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