Betray

by Neepobithi on December 10, 2009, 06:07:44 AM
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                 You came, cut me to pieces
                          And uttered “Sorry”
Didn’t it resonate in conscience?
                          Or slipped in automated hurry?
Time and again forbade you
                          Not to pluck the bloom
Paid no heed stormed from blue
                         Shattered in your weaving loom
Arrow that shot once
                          Can’t rebound in the bow
Innocent dove failed hunch
                          Numbed by killer’s paw
Spell of nightmare
                          Bleeds the pink heart red
Forget and forgive dear
                          Let me lie in eternal bed.
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2009, 06:26:28 PM »
Lovely creation Neepo ji icon_thumleft Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2009, 06:35:31 PM »
Gud one Neepo Ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2009, 01:56:19 AM »
Thank u Madhuji for ur encouragement
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2009, 02:28:26 AM »
Nice One Neepo JI,./
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2009, 08:12:17 AM »
Nice Neepo JI
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