Bright Days

by shivani(9899207979) on December 04, 2008, 09:50:01 AM
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Nature is awakening,
the earth has been blessed
with spring's gift of immortality,
the winter's gray curtain shorn.
And I've been reborn as well,
because you're here
awakening the warmth and harmony
inside me.
Birds on every flowering spray,
raise their heads to sing with joy
at the dawning day,
and my heart sings too,
because I'm in love with you.

The scent of gardenias
fills the air,
the world is coming alive,
and I have not a single care,
because I have faith in you,
and our love.

Apple blossoms create
a canopy overhead,
while roses sprout buds
to paint the garden red,
and the pain in my soul
from yesterday fled,
because you're here with me,
awakening the springtime
of my heart..
Rajesh Harish
«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2008, 10:24:42 AM »
This one has been presented so well
I reaaly enjoyed reading Shivani
anjaan dharkan
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2008, 03:06:28 PM »
i am in complete agreement with rajesh... very well presented! i love the way you arranged your stanzas and that each ended in a similar fashion than the previous stanza! truely professional! keep it up shivani!
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