Darling (Your's Raaj)

by Raajbornonlyforyou on September 03, 2010, 08:08:10 PM
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Darling
Don't know whether I can use this word
But I loved more than any one in this world
I kept your image in my heart
I filled your memories in my mind and living my life

I feel you everytime and everywhere ''Darling''
And I never missed you even for a second
But this world made me to realize that I am alone here
And now I really need you my ''Darling''

Your smiling face used to say that you love me
Your every word that you spoke to me , made me to feel that you love me
But how can I be So blind and So onesided
That I am waiting for the past 13 years for you my love
And the other side, You don't even remember my name

Now  I called you and expressed everything about my love
And I tried to remember you all the memories that I held in my mind
Now you recognize me and like me
But you said you cannot love me
I told that I will wait some more years even whole my life for you
But you said it's tooo late
Darling ! You would have given me few minutes , I would have shown you how much I love you
In every of my breath I feel you
In every of my heart beat I still love you
So , let me live this life in a feel that you still love me ''Darling''  ............Raaj
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 08:49:36 PM »
Very beautiful piece of work Mr. Raaj......keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 09:20:04 PM »
Hello Dear… What a feeling you have expressed here .. very touchy very emotional dear… While reading it I can even feel the pain in it & it filled my eyes with tears….Also  I am so shocked to know the waiting time  …my god 13 years . .. it’s a long time I am surprised that there are still people out there in today’s world … who can still love someone like this … The only thing come from my heart after reading this is .. May God Bless You & Your Love Dear  …         
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 11:08:48 PM »
Very beautiful piece of work Mr. Raaj......keep writing.
thank you very much for your comments....Raaj
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 11:14:01 PM »
Hello Dear… What a feeling you have expressed here .. very touchy very emotional dear… While reading it I can even feel the pain in it & it filled my eyes with tears….Also  I am so shocked to know the waiting time  …my god 13 years . .. it’s a long time I am surprised that there are still people out there in today’s world … who can still love someone like this … The only thing come from my heart after reading this is .. May God Bless You & Your Love Dear  …         

Thank you very much for your wonderful comments , i write here like you one day she may see this and she may understand me how much i love her........Raaj
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 12:25:41 AM »
its a wonderful creation, filled with lots of love and emotions,.

i wish that your love come back to you, may Allah bless you
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 03:24:25 AM »
Raaj jee,

Very expressive bit of a poem..I respect 'true lovers' and you seem to be one..13 yrs is a not a small period..I wish you get your love back..!Ameen!
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2010, 03:55:58 AM »
u making me crazy raaj....
ur style of writing ..ohh ...its just...making me dream of ur love story...wanna know what it really is....
relly mind blowing heart touching creation from ur side.....
loved it....
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