Every time She see

by Raajbornonlyforyou on September 03, 2010, 07:46:42 PM
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Every time she see
she smiles at me
And I am the stupid shying guy
I cannot even smile back at her
She might think that she is not beautiful
Bit it's not true, she is wonderful
I hide near the wall and watch her calmly
She is beautiful and touching my heart slowly
Every day I stand infront of the mirror
And practice how to smile back at her

Every time she see
She stares at me
Now I am able to smile at her
she looks gorgeous
I look in to her eyes
They are so deep and I am falling in love
With those beautiful eyes
I started saying
''Hi , I am Raaj''
She said ''I am Zaara''
I forwarded my hand to give her a shakehand
she is pretty shy than me
She just keep her face down with a shying smile
And gave me her hand
I cannot forget that feel
her hands are like the rose flowers buds
So soft and so pretty
I asked her ''Can I walk with you''
She said ''Can you walk me forever''
I am smiling
She is also smiling
I said ''you are the most beautiful girl
And when you smile , my minds blows away''
She says ''You are cool
You look great with a wonderful smile
I like your walking style''

Every time she finds me
She catches my hand and walks with me.....Raaj
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 07:51:24 PM »
feell like a dream come true.......its beautifull raaj..the way u wrote the poem in story form..aahhhhhh i felt as i m ther...totally engrosed in this dream in this imagnation.....

wowwwwwww wonderful dear..... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 07:52:04 PM »
waiting for more dreams from ur side raaj.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 07:56:22 PM »
Thank you very much for you
waiting for more dreams from ur side raaj.....
thank you  very much for your kind comments and support , i really appreciate. I am new to this site and I like to be here....Raaj
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 04:15:02 AM »
ur most welcome here raaj...and u r too good in expressing ur feelings.....
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