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prempagla

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hey folks am new to this forum ,never did shayari before just wana post this hope u all like this........... tongue3

Unki har baat dil lubhaati hai,
Har adaa , har khataa bhi bhati hai.
Dil mai.n mere khayaal aaye to,
Baat unki zubaa.n pe aati hai .
Paas baithe.n to aisa lagataa hai,
Jaise woh har janam ki saathi hai.n
Sab Mere haal par pareshaan hai.n
Ek woh hain ki muskuraati hai.n .
Geet meraa likhaa hi hai shaayad,
Woh jo haule se gun gunaati hai.n ,
Hai agar sakht woh usulo.n ki,
To meri neend kyo.n churaati hai.n .
Mere rabba mujhe bataa to zara,
Ishq karake bhi kyo.n chupaati hai.n .

Maaareli shayari hai bhidu log.....
other peoples shayri allowed na?


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immi

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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2004, 04:48:42 PM »

BHidu shayeri maari bhi to la-jawab maari.
Bahot khub.......


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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2004, 05:07:11 PM »

nice prempagla.... maareli shayari allowed to hai..lekin (not mine) ya (NM) likhna bhi zaroori hai .. ! welcome to the forum !!


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prempagla

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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2004, 05:11:01 PM »

ok thanx for da welcome , and next time i will take care of this NM thingy............. glasses2


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nishita

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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2004, 05:20:34 PM »

prempagla

Chilman jo hati chand bhi sharmane laga un se,
Ye kaisa ujala sa kiye jayen teri ankhen,
Ankhon ko meri gark-e-tahir to kiya tu ne,
Hai is pe sitam hont siye jayen teri ankhen (NM)


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immi

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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2004, 05:23:02 PM »

Nice Nishita


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prempagla

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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2004, 05:32:39 PM »

Aaankhein? Huh?

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MAZAA BARSAAT KA LENA HAY TO MERE ANKHOON MAIN AA BETHO,
WOH BARSOOON MAIN KABHI BARSAY YEH BARSOON SAY BARASTII HAIN!!!
(NM)
Nice nishita!!!!!!!!!!!1


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immi

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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2004, 05:38:41 PM »

Bahot Khoob Prempagla bahot khoob !!!!!!!!!


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nishita

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«Reply #8 on: November 10, 2004, 05:40:35 PM »

thks immi .. and nice prempagla...

ankhon me basana chahte hai wo hume
barsaat dikhana chahte hai wo hume
jo kabhi unhone hi diye the tohfe me hume
un ashkon ko dikhana chahte hai wo hume


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Talat

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«Reply #9 on: November 10, 2004, 05:43:10 PM »

Wah! Nishi..bohot achche.. nice prempagla


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immi

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«Reply #10 on: November 10, 2004, 05:43:15 PM »

well said Nishita !!


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prempagla

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«Reply #11 on: November 10, 2004, 05:50:17 PM »

ufff ye aankhein !!!! lol

aansoon ko aankhon ki dehleez par laya na karo
apne dil ki haalat kisi ko bataaya na karo
log muth-thi bhar namak liye ghooma karte hain
apne zakham kisi ko dikhaaya na karo
(NM)
samjhee nishita lol Winking


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«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2004, 05:53:11 PM »

lol


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nishita

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«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2004, 05:58:32 PM »

thks talat Usual Smile

and immi

and lol bhidu ji..

Muskurane se bhi hota hai bayaan gham-e-dil
mujh ko rone ki bhi adat ho zaroori to nahi (NM) @ bhidu


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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2004, 06:08:35 PM »

Muskurake gam dikhana nautanki kahlati hai,
jab ghum hota hai do boond aankhon se apne aap chalak aati hai!!1
(its mine)

lol thakeli one


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