hope is all we got:English

akashsharma1990

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I had written this when nothing was clear what i have to do.
I was Completely surrounded by negativity.
At that time i only had a hope that i will reach my destination.
So here it is.
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Why dont you just stay out
Why you always have to shout
Why Life is moving so slow
Why I am Feeling very low

Why i have some confusion
Why am I missing dedication
Why i dont get my answer
Why there is no cure for this cancer

Hope everything will be all right
Hope future will be bright
Hope there will be answer for every question
Hope someday i will get my lost inspiration.

i will tell the world who am I
One day i will touch the sky
I will live without any fear and
Soon My destination will be very clear


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mkv

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Re: hope is all we got

«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2012, 08:39:20 AM »

Aakash jee
touching lines, you have written it very well.
beautiful poem with deep thoughts.
you really deserve the appreciation for this.
rightly said, negativity should be fought with positiveness. i have personally felt and experience that it works..but it takes time before you could really do it.
One question came in my mind by reading the line"Why there is no cure for this cancer"
is it spontaneous ??
whatever..answer you know already..positiveness..


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akashsharma1990

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Re: hope is all we got

«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2012, 08:46:19 AM »

Quote from: mkv on May 20, 2012, 08:39:20 AM

Thank you sir for d appreciation.i am on 7th cloud after ur comment.
And yes that line was spontaneous.
Apne aap dimag me aayi aur maine likh di bas.


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mkv

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Re: hope is all we got

«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2012, 08:59:01 AM »

Thanks, there are many answers to the quoted lines. Not good to discuss here. Lot of information is readily available.
Wish good luck for those who are suffering to have enough strength to fight with positive frame of mind.


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Re: hope is all we got

«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2012, 10:30:33 AM »

heart touching


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Re: hope is all we got

«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2012, 03:12:43 PM »

Quote from: akashsharma1990 on May 20, 2012, 08:31:30 AM

I had written this when nothing was clear what i have to do.
I was Completely surrounded by negativity.
At that time i only had a hope that i will reach my destination.
So here it is.
...

Why dont you just stay out
Why you always have to shout
Why Life is moving so slow
Why I am Feeling very low

Why i have some confusion
Why am I missing dedication
Why i dont get my answer
Why there is no cure for this cancer

Hope everything will be all right
Hope future will be bright
Hope there will be answer for every question
Hope someday i will get my lost inspiration.

i will tell the world who am I
One day i will touch the sky
I will live without any fear and
Soon My destination will be very clear

Heart-Felt Lines..Beautiful Emotions..

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!


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