I Did Cry

by attoo on June 12, 2008, 07:20:47 PM
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attoo
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What are you doing here in my thoughts?
I thought you left me for a long time ago.
You left me with a broken heart,
Left me without telling what the problem was.

I thought I could handle that,
Thought I could live without you.
But now, suddenly,
You're back..?

I got so many other things to do,
I got a whole life to go through.
But still I remember,
Those days...you and me...

NO!

I don't want these thoughts!
I don't need you here in my life!
I won't remember that day,
I just want you away!

It was steaming inside me,
My heart was crying more then ever.
When you left me...
I still remember that day.
And now, please go away!

I remember when your friend told me that,
That you don't want anything to do with me.
How can I cry for that?!
I don't need a jerk like you in my life!

But I did.
I did cry when you left.
But before that,
I slowly got to know,
Know that you didn't love me any more,
That you don't give a shit!

I did cry...
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2008, 08:11:02 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley hello2 hello2 notworthy notworthy notworthy
i dont know how many more icons to use
i just wanted you to get the news
this is poetry i like to read
words that make a writer's soul feel freed
so continue with your verbal liberation
let your emotions flow un-abated
so the power of words can be celebrated
and a big kick in the face for the idiot so "hated"

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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2008, 08:28:04 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause wonderful... a good creation!! Good job Attoo ji..

I liked these lines most:
I got so many other things to do,
I got a whole life to go through.
But still I remember,
Those days...you and me...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2008, 09:09:30 PM »
Superb   Applause  Applause  Thumbs UP
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