i hope this does not wase your time

by no_good_stranger on March 24, 2008, 04:41:18 PM
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i have this need from time to time
to drop by and share a rhyme
even thou,these day i am so tired
i dont allow myself to be inspired
the pressure of work has a cost
all creativity have i lost
this may sound like meaningless dribble
but my thoughts on paper i have to scribble
so on and on will i ramble
with my frail ego will i gamble
and as these words come to mind
i will acknowldge that God is kind
even thou my brain feels vegetative
i still have the ability to be a little creative
so if you take the time,and this work you rated
I HOPE YOU DONT FEEL THAT YOUR TIME I'VE WASTED
and i'll be courteous,and thank your'll in advance
for the kind comments,as a return visit who know's when i'll get a chance
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2008, 04:58:48 PM »
Nice poem NG stranger..Usual Smile
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2008, 06:40:10 PM »
thanks for taking the time honey
you really tooo sweet
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2008, 02:13:47 AM »
Very nice Ziyaad !!
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2008, 02:31:29 PM »
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