I Know I Hurt

by suman59 on February 14, 2013, 04:25:50 PM
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I know I hurt this beautiful heart
Unable to end this dreadful start
Failed to read these eyes
that spread words of wisdom, silently said
I know I hurt this wonderful mind
No place it's silent plea's
Could find quitely this pain
Poor soul could bear eyes, now,
even refused to tear

So pardon's begged for attemps
I make for all my truth's
Suddenly seems so fake
Please believe me, when I say I do
Really truly care for you..
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2013, 04:48:45 PM »
Acha Hai

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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2013, 04:53:24 PM »
Bahut hi badhiya Suman jee, kaafi achhi lagi.
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2013, 04:57:01 PM »
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sbechain
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2013, 05:10:08 PM »
I know I hurt this beautiful heart
Unable to end this dreadful start
Failed to read these eyes
that spread words of wisdom, silently said
I know I hurt this wonderful mind
No place it's silent plea's
Could find quitely this pain
Poor soul could bear eyes, now,
even refused to tear

So pardon's begged for attemps
I make for all my truth's
Suddenly seems so fake
Please believe me, when I say I do
Really truly care for you..


ofcourse suman ji realizing our fault is itself make a pardon in front of others. very good....................!
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mkv
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2013, 05:23:04 PM »
The waves originated froma true heart propagates in all directions and definitely reaches to it's destination.
very touchy lines from the bottom of heart.
and the last one..beautiful

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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2013, 06:02:20 PM »
I know I hurt this beautiful heart
Unable to end this dreadful start
Failed to read these eyes
that spread words of wisdom, silently said
I know I hurt this wonderful mind
No place it's silent plea's
Could find quitely this pain
Poor soul could bear eyes, now,
even refused to tear

So pardon's begged for attemps
I make for all my truth's
Suddenly seems so fake
Please believe me, when I say I do
Really truly care for you..

Very nice lines ji
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aqsh
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2013, 03:29:16 AM »
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Just awesome
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Tuhina
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 09:54:44 AM »
very  nice  suman  jee......
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deepansh
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2013, 06:52:32 PM »
"Read Carefully And Get The
Meaning"......
"Minimum Love Is Friendship"
And
"Maximum Friendship Is Love"
Strange But True......
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