I know it was you !!

by razmi on October 07, 2004, 06:22:59 AM
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razmi
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A full moon night brought joy in my life,
Was that your hand of friendship ?
 
The rising wave of the sea lifted my spirit,
Was that your trust and confidence in me ?
 
The fragrance of the flowers gave new aroma to my life
Was that your feeling of caring and concern for me ?
 
A gentle wind blew away all my sorrows,
Was that your gentle hair ?
 
A bright sunshine cleared the darkness of my life,
Was that your enchanting smile ?
 
A rainbow in the sky gave colors to my life,
I know it was you !!
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aditya
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2004, 06:39:57 AM »
Quote from: "razmi"
A full moon night brought joy in my life,
Was that your hand of friendship ?
 
The rising wave of the sea lifted my spirit,
Was that your trust and confidence in me ?
 
The fragrance of the flowers gave new aroma to my life
Was that your feeling of caring and concern for me ?
 
A gentle wind blew away all my sorrows,
Was that your gentle hair ?
 
A bright sunshine cleared the darkness of my life,
Was that your enchanting smile ?
 
A rainbow in the sky gave colors to my life,
I know it was you !! one night a tear rolled out of my eyes and when i ask it  why shoud it came out then it says that someone is so beautiful in ur eyes that i have no space insight
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razmi
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2004, 03:46:42 AM »
Beautiful Aditya !! You had almost my tears rolling out of my eye. Your lines have given a new dimension to my poem..Thanks !!
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2004, 08:55:59 AM »
beautiful.... botn of you..!:)
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akela
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2004, 08:29:43 PM »
nice job all


sometimes in a dark gloomy night,i see a shadow,
is it my illusion ,or is it really you,?
 in a chilly winter evening ,i hear a sound
is it a illusion or is it really you?,
  when i see snow falling ,i feel someone standing there,
is it a illusion ,or is it really you,?
       
             then i close my eyes and see a face which is not new,
             then i realise it's not a illusion ,it is really you.
            u came back becauz u know i love you.
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Suhas
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2004, 04:41:21 AM »
Nice one....akela
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Suhas
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2004, 04:42:59 AM »
If you are ever
going to love me,
Love me now,
while I can know
The sweet and tender feelings,
Which from true affection flow.
Love me now
While I am living.
Do not wait until I'm gone
And then have it chiseled in marble,
Sweet words on ice-cold stone.
If you have tender thoughts of me,
Please tell me now.
If you wait until I'm sleeping,
Never to awaken,
There will be death between us,
And I won't hear you then.
So, if you love me,
even a little bit,
Let me know it
while I am living
So I can treasure it.  (N/M)
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nishita
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2004, 10:08:11 AM »
bohat bohat achhe all
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razmi
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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2004, 03:37:09 AM »
"I know you miss me like I do, you want to be with me like I do,
You remain quite but yor eyes say a lot,  so strike the iron when still it is hot"
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akela
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2004, 07:22:25 PM »
Gloomy Sunday.

Gloomy is Sunday, with shadows I spend it all.
My heart and I have decided to end it all.
Soon there'll be candles and prayers that are sad, I know.
 But let them not weep, let them know that I'm glad to go.
Death is no dream, for in death I'm caressing you.
 With the last breath of my soul I'll be blessing you.[nm]


its from a song called gloomy sunday.dont go in depth,its dangerous.
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Tosha
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2004, 05:36:19 AM »
wow..!

in my dreams
all along the silent night
i could feel the wind
right on my face
was it just dream
or was an indecation
it was a calm serene situation
i know i could fly
i think someone was by my side
is it just the feel
or you came out of my dreams
i know you were right besides me
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nishita
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2004, 07:17:37 AM »
wow all rite ..m gonna contribute too

I don't regret loving you.
You taught me how to smile.
I don't regret losing you.
You loved me for a while.
It's better to have known you Than never to have felt
The way a simple touch from you Could make my hard heart melt. "


this ones really close to my heart sad5
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Tosha
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2004, 07:45:30 AM »
sweet nishi
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nishita
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2004, 08:31:55 AM »
thx tosha Usual Smile
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akela
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2004, 07:39:31 PM »
great job guys

Gloomy Sunday.

Dreaming, I was only dreaming.
 I wake and I find you asleep in the deep of my heart, dear.
Darling, I hope that my dream never haunted you.
My heart is telling you how much I wanted you.(nm)
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