I Thought I Could Trust You

by attoo on June 12, 2008, 07:24:01 PM
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attoo
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We used to have great times together, didn't we?
The wasy we used to talk to each other?
The way we looked at each other?
The wasy we loved, each other?

I used to think about you all the time,
Couldn't be a second without.
I couldn't hear anything else,
I was totally lost in my own world,
With you.

But when I found out who you really are,
I felt like a fool.
When you left me,
I thought;
How could I trust you?

It really hurted when you left me,
When you just walked away.
Without a word,
You just, left.

And now I have to suffer with this,
This stupid pain.
Through my whole life, thinking;
How could I?
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2008, 07:38:29 PM »
good work
loved the honesty of the feelings
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2008, 08:25:41 PM »
wow!! too good attoo ji!!
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2008, 09:07:36 PM »
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It really hurted when you left me,
When you just walked away.
Without a word,
You just, left.

And now I have to suffer with this,
This stupid pain.
Through my whole life, thinking;
How could I?

Very good lines Attoo Jee...  Applause
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