I wish you were here

by no_good_stranger on December 04, 2007, 12:17:36 PM
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I wish you were here,to share my sadness
to hear your infectous laugh when you indulge in my madness Grin

I wish you were here,to sooth my pain sad5
to be my shelter from the storm,when my spirits drenched in rain

I wish you were here to hold my my hand
and not far away in some distant land

I wish you were here to see my face Crying
to see the tears,and trace the lines they've left on my face

I wish you were here in my arms
to hold you close,as only you,can keep me calm

I wish you were here, by my side all day
to have you near,so from my sight you should never stray

I wish you were here,your holiday to be over soon
then i'll be jumping for joy,doing cartwheels over the moon
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natural
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2007, 12:38:20 PM »
Very nice.... Usual Smile
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2007, 03:56:05 PM »
wel nice is good,so thank you natural
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2007, 06:30:30 PM »
Too good... Ziyaad
Very nice writing..

May all your wishes be fulfilled... Usual Smile
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2007, 10:11:44 PM »
your words too kind Shiklaji
thanks a mill
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2007, 04:17:34 PM »
its really nice.. which very touching words.. to feel that situation .. really Good one.
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2007, 06:17:32 PM »
thanks for the appreciation
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2007, 01:49:26 PM »
Very good you expressed your feelings in a poetic way...
Touchy lines...

I wish you were here to see my face
to see the tears,and trace the lines they've left on my face


God bless ...... keep smiling.
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2007, 02:13:16 PM »
this is why i write,thanks roja,you make me feel my efforts are  worth while
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: December 09, 2007, 02:23:39 PM »
this is why i write,thanks roja,you make me feel my efforts are  worth while

Welcome. I always feel sad when i read emotional lines... sometimes i feel those lines came deep from heart....
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2007, 03:04:13 PM »
well i only write from the heart
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