If I Told You...

by angel4u on July 01, 2006, 11:54:19 AM
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If I Told You I Loved You,
Would You Push Me Away?
Or Would You Let Me Fall Into Your ArMs,
Where, Forever, I Would Stay?

If I Told You I Needed You,
Would You Feel The SaMe?
Could You Let Me Need You Everyday,
Forever And Eternally?

If I Told You I Hated You,
Would You Believe The Words I Say?
Would You Turn Your Back On Me
And Leave Me Alone To Pray?

If I Told You I Was Crying,
Would You Be Right By My Side,
To Put Your ArMs Around My Shoulders
Until The Feelings Pass Me By?

If I Told You Everything,
Could You Still Feel The SaMe?
Now That You Know Exactly Who I AM,
Would You Still Be Mine To ClaiM?

If I Told You...
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2006, 04:27:18 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"

If I Told You I Loved You,
Would You Push Me Away?
Or Would You Let Me Fall Into Your ArMs,
Where, Forever, I Would Stay?

If I Told You I Needed You,
Would You Feel The SaMe?
Could You Let Me Need You Everyday,
Forever And Eternally?

If I Told You I Hated You,
Would You Believe The Words I Say?
Would You Turn Your Back On Me
And Leave Me Alone To Pray?

If I Told You I Was Crying,
Would You Be Right By My Side,
To Put Your ArMs Around My Shoulders
Until The Feelings Pass Me By?

If I Told You Everything,
Could You Still Feel The SaMe?
Now That You Know Exactly Who I AM,
Would You Still Be Mine To ClaiM?

If I Told You...


bahut khoob.........
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2006, 03:47:20 PM »
Bahut shukriya Usual Smile
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Padam Rawal
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2006, 06:51:46 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"
Bahut shukriya Usual Smile


Quote from: "angel4u"
Maar Diya Hai:)
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2006, 02:13:53 PM »
Kisne maara?Huh? Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2006, 10:24:27 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"

If I Told You I Loved You,
Would You Push Me Away?
Or Would You Let Me Fall Into Your ArMs,
Where, Forever, I Would Stay?

If I Told You I Needed You,
Would You Feel The SaMe?
Could You Let Me Need You Everyday,
Forever And Eternally?

If I Told You I Hated You,
Would You Believe The Words I Say?
Would You Turn Your Back On Me
And Leave Me Alone To Pray?

If I Told You I Was Crying,
Would You Be Right By My Side,
To Put Your ArMs Around My Shoulders
Until The Feelings Pass Me By?

If I Told You Everything,
Could You Still Feel The SaMe?
Now That You Know Exactly Who I AM,
Would You Still Be Mine To ClaiM?

If I Told You...


nice 1........ gud going.................

i have written a few in this thread......... do write............. ur words should inspire me to get writing as well......... http://www.yoindia.com/forums/-i-wish-you-wud-care--vt15307.html
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angel4u
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2006, 01:44:13 AM »
Puzzled !
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2006, 11:13:17 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"

If I Told You I Loved You,
Would You Push Me Away?
Or Would You Let Me Fall Into Your ArMs,
Where, Forever, I Would Stay?

If I Told You I Needed You,
Would You Feel The SaMe?
Could You Let Me Need You Everyday,
Forever And Eternally?

If I Told You I Hated You,
Would You Believe The Words I Say?
Would You Turn Your Back On Me
And Leave Me Alone To Pray?

If I Told You I Was Crying,
Would You Be Right By My Side,
To Put Your ArMs Around My Shoulders
Until The Feelings Pass Me By?

If I Told You Everything,
Could You Still Feel The SaMe?
Now That You Know Exactly Who I AM,
Would You Still Be Mine To ClaiM?

If I Told You...


Awesome !khool ! so sweet thaught !
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2006, 06:45:40 PM »
this poem reminded of Enrique's song Hero...It is my fav song....Bful work Angel..Keep it up sweety
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