I'm lost some where! -Panna 2:English

Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #15 on: March 03, 2010, 06:56:32 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on March 01, 2010, 08:38:24 AM

I'm lost some where, at the cost of a find!
I know not who controls my mind!
Some unknown forces have locked me
In a prison that's like an Eden kind!

- G.R.Prakash

Wonderful creation Abd Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: I'm lost some where!

«Reply #16 on: March 03, 2010, 03:37:55 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 03, 2010, 06:56:32 AM

Wonderful creation Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh Harish ji!

- abd bundeli


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Talat

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Re: I'm lost some where!

«Reply #17 on: March 03, 2010, 04:31:29 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on March 03, 2010, 06:20:07 AM

Some one calls me from horizons deep:
Sound reverberates even in my sleep!
I wander hither an' thither perplexed,
On sea-waves high or mountains steep!!

Oh!where are you? Why'd you call me?
What for are these unending calls?
I'm busy endlessly (Do you know?),
For there is something that enthralls!

- G.R.Prakash

Once again, very very nice....


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abdbundeli

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Re: I'm lost some where!

«Reply #18 on: March 04, 2010, 06:30:28 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on March 03, 2010, 04:31:29 PM

Once again, very very nice....

Thanks bitia Talat!

- abd bundeli


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drpandey

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Re: I'm lost some where!

«Reply #19 on: March 04, 2010, 08:24:07 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on March 03, 2010, 06:20:07 AM

Thanks Pandey ji!

Some one calls me from horizons deep:
Sound reverberates even in my sleep!
I wander hither an' thither perplexed,
On sea-waves high or mountains steep!!

Oh!where are you? Why'd you call me?
What for are these unending calls?
I'm busy endlessly (Do you know?),
For there is something that enthralls!

- G.R.Prakash

Again excellent creation..the words are now deserted to express my apperciations...really marvelous....

The call of someone seems eternal,
As if emitting the gospel evangel!
The fragrance steps in deep & deep,
Spreading around, enthralling sleep!


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abdbundeli

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Re: I'm lost some where!

«Reply #20 on: March 04, 2010, 02:02:34 PM »

Quote from: drpandey on March 04, 2010, 08:24:07 AM

Again excellent creation..the words are now deserted to express my apperciations...really marvelous....

The call of someone seems eternal,
As if emitting the gossip evangel!
The fragrance steps in deep & deep,
Spreading around, enthralling sleep!

Quite possibly, Dr. Pandey! Thanks!

I feel "gossip evangel!" has a typing error! It should, probably, be 'gospel evangel' or 'evangelic gospel'!
I'm afraid, I know rather very little about the Christen Mythology or the like!

Such calls are eternally incessant:
And, have filled cosmos for ages!
The saints exposed the Vedas from such voices,
It's said an' believed: those torrents filled those pages!
Long-long ago; might be a long millennium;
Their contents appeared visibly to those sages!!

- G.R.Prakash