**In the middle of this graveyard**

by dead heart on March 12, 2009, 07:30:03 PM
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Standing in the middle of this graveyard,
I admire leaves falling like my life did,
I feel rain drops pouring like my blood did,
I hear sounds of souls like I did when mine cried,
In the middle of this graveyard...

She deepened my heart in acid slowly by slowly,
Burnt it nicely while giving me a cursed smile,
I could still see hatred for me in her eyes,
And she said 'you made a mistake by loving me',
In the middle of this graveyard...

She cursed me with her love,
Blessed me with her hatred,
She prayes for a gift of death for me,
She buried my dreams and my heart alive,
In the middle of this graveyard...

          -Burried Heart-
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 05:08:28 AM »
May b u did'nt give time it'z pace
may b u tired off quickly from  race
may b the bond was loosened from base
or the destiny may have changed itz phrase

what went wrong neither two of us know
only sorrows is what our fate bestowed
but still i keep my inner soul glow
when to graveyard my body slowed


 
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2009, 08:38:18 AM »
Beautiful Work...........Its fantastic.
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2009, 08:54:40 AM »
Very nice sharing Heart ji
Nice one Zama sis Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2009, 09:47:10 AM »
Wow, Kya Khoob Creatiion Hai Rahim Bhai,.
Bohat achche, And Nice One Zama Ji,.
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2009, 07:41:26 PM »
Shukriya Azeem bhaijan, Sajid saheb aur Salma jee...
Well written Zama jee...u r good at rhyming poems.... Applause
Time was enough as was my love,
I was out of the race as she threw me away,
The pace was set for Rahim to get her but she ahd other plans,
I was knocked out of the game as she hugged sumone else...

                 -Burried Heart-
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2009, 07:51:43 PM »
Good one Rahim N Equally good response Zama Ji
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2009, 07:59:40 PM »
Thanks alot for appreciating Rajesh jee
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«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2009, 05:21:47 AM »
Shukriya Azeem bhaijan, Sajid saheb aur Salma jee...
Well written Zama jee...u r good at rhyming poems.... Applause
Time was enough as was my love,
I was out of the race as she threw me away,
The pace was set for Rahim to get her but she ahd other plans,
I was knocked out of the game as she hugged sumone else...

                 -Burried Heart-


Hugging someone is not a sin
unless the intention turns to b a dust bin
never except anything in return
for love happened in u r concern

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«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2009, 05:23:07 AM »
Thankz for the appreciation .@Salma ji,Rajesh ji,Jaanasheen ji,Sajid ji....and heart ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2009, 06:50:55 PM »
ur most welcome Zama jee

He died in the pain she gave him,
He drowned in his cursed tears,
He who was called Rahim sometime back,
Is called 'burried heart' today...

Sry Zama jee...these were the only lines that came into my mind...I know they rnt very gud but there is a hidden meaning in them...
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«Reply #11 on: March 15, 2009, 01:21:33 AM »
ur most welcome Zama jee

He died in the pain she gave him,
He drowned in his cursed tears,
He who was called Rahim sometime back,
Is called 'burried heart' today...

Sry Zama jee...these were the only lines that came into my mind...I know they rnt very gud but there is a hidden meaning in them...


Don't count what she gave to u
sum up what u gave to her
may b in someone else's arms
she feels secured n feel no harm's

Today u r eyes are wet with tears
but there was time when love was in cheers
the wound will b faded as passes years
life is not what it seems to appear

i know no story..i know no tales
all i know is trust never fails
life keeps on way a hundred trail's
it's then atlast... the ship...wills to sail

Sail u r ship in a speedy high
dont luk at yesterdays nightmare standing by
for u r the captain of u r destiny
so.....take the matter a bit brainy


Heart ji...

there's no need to ask sorry 'n all....itz u r story u said in words ...and itz my advise i give through words......in short i just wanna say forget the past n live the present ...agar zyada bol diya hai toh maaf kijiyega...

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«Reply #12 on: March 15, 2009, 02:10:21 AM »
Too Good Rahim & Equally Good Zama.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 15, 2009, 07:48:23 AM »
Shukriya Khwahish jee...
Zama jee u havent said alot and i dnt mind u saying anything...
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«Reply #14 on: March 15, 2009, 07:51:31 AM »

Don't count what she gave to u
sum up what u gave to her
may b in someone else's arms
she feels secured n feel no harm's

Today u r eyes are wet with tears
but there was time when love was in cheers
the wound will b faded as passes years
life is not what it seems to appear

i know no story..i know no tales
all i know is trust never fails
life keeps on way a hundred trail's
it's then atlast... the ship...wills to sail

Sail u r ship in a speedy high
dont luk at yesterdays nightmare standing by
for u r the captain of u r destiny
so.....take the matter a bit brainy


Heart ji...

there's no need to ask sorry 'n all....itz u r story u said in words ...and itz my advise i give through words......in short i just wanna say forget the past n live the present ...agar zyada bol diya hai toh maaf kijiyega...


Well said Zama jee and well written as well...I understand wat u wanted to say..thanx for that litle piece of advice...
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