It feels like heaven

by myheart_ursonly on March 07, 2005, 05:08:46 PM
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"It feels like heaven"
by Amit

I've got a new job this day,
my work is to keep loving you;
because with just a thought of you,
my entire world seems to be anew.

Swear of the sun above both of us,
that keeps shining bright,
I will give you all my love,
unconditionally; day and night.

Having you, at no distance,
might seem a dream today.
And if this is just a feeling,
then I am happier in this way.

As the life progresses, I hope,
this dream will be a reality.
As I can see myself with you,
holding near, till an eternity.

I will keep waiting for long,
to explore your irresistible charms,
because it feels like heaven,
when I feel you in my arms.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 05:13:41 PM »
very  nice  heart..............
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Princess21
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2005, 05:14:54 PM »
Beautiful...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2005, 07:17:00 PM »
Waheed,

Thank you.

Princess,

Thank you. Beautiful who? poem or me;-)
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Princess21
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2005, 07:24:41 PM »
hmmmmm MAIn to poem ko hi kaha thaa...
haha
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sanya310
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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2005, 07:24:44 PM »
Usual Smile beautiful...poem... tongue3
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Princess21
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2005, 07:27:20 PM »
hahah sanya sis..
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2005, 07:28:04 PM »
Princess,

I knew. J/K;-) Amit ki chamchi.

Sanya,

Thank you very much.
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Princess21
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2005, 07:28:52 PM »
ohhhhh AChaaaa!!
app ko kiss ne kaha main amit ki chamchi hoon...
hahaa
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2005, 09:42:02 PM »
YEH AAJ WADA HAI MERA TUM S AYE BEWAFA
YAHAN NAHIN TU KISI ROZ HEAVEN MEIN HI MILEIN GAY
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #10 on: March 08, 2005, 04:39:42 AM »
lol neha, kidding

good one, fakhar
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Tosha
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«Reply #11 on: March 08, 2005, 06:14:38 AM »
in this funny world you n me live
where love is a matter of fate
lust does exist
i c the beauty in ur eyes
i kno it comes from deep inside
the magic has worked on you
bewitched you create wonders:)
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2005, 06:17:25 AM »
nice amit and nice Tosha.
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Tosha
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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2005, 07:05:51 AM »
tnx...nidhi...Winking
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2005, 11:27:50 AM »
Nice, tosha.

Thank you, Nidhi.
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