Layer & Layers Of Those Moments

by Bhupinder Kaur on September 03, 2013, 01:48:19 PM
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Layer & layers
Of those Moments
Covers me All over
It is so Fresh … that …
If I jus blink
& thinks for a while
Everything appears... in Front of My Eyes
& it’s completely alive
As if it’s happening in present
& not emerged from Piece of My Mind
The Voice of it,
Is so Sharp … that …
It Echoes Loud & Louder
Whether I m Talking or Sitting quietly
It Speaks to Me more & more
Hitting My Inner Core
& thn it Shivers me
From Top to Bottom
As if, it is Month of that Cold


The Scent of it, so Strong…  that…
It  Fills Me Whole
Whether I m in Crowd or Alone
It never Leaves me, To Be My Own
It makes me Smile & then to Cry
Though many years have bn passed
Still doesn’t know why???
They keep Following me
Or m I Sensing them
To live my life    with them
Yaa its True  &  it wud b Lie
If I say that, They Weren’t Mine
But somewhere, I also feels
How long with them
I will survive….
One day will surely come
U will Be Mine
Or just I will be a Last Shine………Ameen
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2013, 02:25:26 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2013, 03:00:50 PM »
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Yaa its True  &  it wud b Lie
If I say that, They Weren’t Mine
But somewhere, I also feels
How long with them
I will survive….
One day will surely come
U will Be Mine
Or just I will be a Last Shine………

Awesome linesssssss.. beautifully prosed bhupinder ji...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2013, 04:19:17 PM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on September 03, 2013, 01:48:19 PM
Layer & layers
Of those Moments
Covers me All over
It is so Fresh … that …
If I jus blink
& thinks for a while
Everything appears... in Front of My Eyes
& it’s completely alive
As if it’s happening in present
& not emerged from Piece of My Mind
The Voice of it,
Is so Sharp … that …
It Echoes Loud & Louder
Whether I m Talking or Sitting quietly
It Speaks to Me more & more
Hitting My Inner Core
& thn it Shivers me
From Top to Bottom
As if, it is Month of that Cold


The Scent of it, so Strong…  that…
It  Fills Me Whole
Whether I m in Crowd or Alone
It never Leaves me, To Be My Own
It makes me Smile & then to Cry
Though many years have bn passed
Still doesn’t know why???
They keep Following me
Or m I Sensing them
To live my life    with them
Yaa its True  &  it wud b Lie
If I say that, They Weren’t Mine
But somewhere, I also feels
How long with them
I will survive….
One day will surely come
U will Be Mine
Or just I will be a Last Shine………Ameen



Its Always A Pleasure To Read You..

As Always Beautiful....

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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2013, 07:12:41 PM »
good one............. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2013, 09:07:20 PM »
Mind blowing creation.
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2013, 12:07:34 AM »
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Bahut bahut touchy n nice creation bhupinder jee..bole to siti wala write up..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2013, 03:45:01 PM »
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just outstanding..
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 07:20:43 PM »
Quote from: Iqtedar on September 03, 2013, 02:25:26 PM
Aameen...
wonderful, superb...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: nandbahu on September 04, 2013, 09:18:14 AM
bahut khoob
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 04, 2013, 03:45:01 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

just outstanding..
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 03, 2013, 09:07:20 PM
Mind blowing creation.
Quote from: Miraj. on September 03, 2013, 07:12:41 PM
good one............. Thumbs UP
Quote from: aqsh on September 03, 2013, 03:00:50 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yaa its True  &  it wud b Lie
If I say that, They Weren’t Mine
But somewhere, I also feels
How long with them
I will survive….
One day will surely come
U will Be Mine
Or just I will be a Last Shine………

Awesome linesssssss.. beautifully prosed bhupinder ji...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
THANK YOU ALL
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 07:21:14 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2013, 02:29:30 PM
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Thank You Sir ji
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