~*~*Me AgAiNsT mYsElF~*~*

by ghayal_shayar on July 08, 2005, 09:26:27 AM
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hey frnds i hav tried 2 pen down my feelins abt myself so pls reply abt it n pls tell me that hoz that.if i hav only been able 2 write or not.






in such little an age,
such things i hav seen.
that people of my age,
just can't imagine.

i always wanted 2 b,
that ellite groups member.
whom after the death also,
people will always remember.

so i started doing everything,
that i cud under the sun.
n thus bcame jack of all trades,
but master of none.

everywhere i go people xpect,
me always 2 make fun.
but my frnz this u sud accept,
that i m not d sun.

sun can give light without disruption non-stop,
but alas!dear due 2 sorrows i m bound 2 stop.

i m not as bad,
as i do pretend.
but i m much more sad,
than that what i send.

many people in my life ,
i had trusted.
but afterwards i was very sorry,
since they were all rusted.

at last i wud only say that,
that i just don't lie,
wen i say they go in life very high,
who come out of the words me n i.
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tamana
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2005, 06:11:34 AM »
Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"
hey frnds i hav tried 2 pen down my feelins abt myself so pls reply abt it n pls tell me that hoz that.if i hav only been able 2 write or not.






in such little an age,
such things i hav seen.
that people of my age,
just can't imagine.

i always wanted 2 b,
that ellite groups member.
whom after the death also,
people will always remember.

so i started doing everything,
that i cud under the sun.
n thus bcame jack of all trades,
but master of none.

everywhere i go people xpect,
me always 2 make fun.
but my frnz this you sud accept,
that i m not d sun.

sun can give light without disruption non-stop,
but alas!dear due 2 sorrows i m bound 2 stop.

i m not as bad,
as i do pretend.
but i m much more sad,
than that what i send.

many people in my life ,
i had trusted.
but afterwards i was very sorry,
since they were all rusted.

at last i wud only say that,
that i just don't lie,
wen i say they go in life very high,
who come out of the words me n i.


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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2005, 01:25:25 PM »
thanks tamana ji bas aise hi aate rahiye aur hum ahche se ahcha likhte rahenge...........
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tamana
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2005, 05:23:48 AM »
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thanks tamana ji bas aise hi aate rahiye aur hum ahche se ahcha likhte rahenge...........


ji bilkul aap likhte rahain hum aatay rahain ge
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2006, 09:56:40 AM »
nice piece of worked down feelings...!!
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