My Life ....... !!!!!

by Talat on February 11, 2006, 09:36:27 AM
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Walking in dark, on an unknown path
Following the light from my heart

Where am I heading? No one knows
Where will I find my sky with rainbow?

Right or wrong, I have chosen my fate
Will you be or you wont be my mate?

Embarking upon an unknown destination
I have with me my love and my passion

I am not a moon I am not a flower
Neither a leaf that shines after shower

I don’t have a beauty that can blind the eyes
I am a small blinking star in the corner of sky

What lies ahead of the mist and dark?
Will I be left with a broken heart?

With a smile on my face, I will bear the pain
My eyes wont show tears so much it will rain!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2006, 12:37:51 PM »
Beautiful talat,really very touching.Keep writing.And ya,nice 2 c u Puzzled ! .
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2006, 04:57:34 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Walking in dark, on an unknown path
Following the light from my heart

Where am I heading? No one knows
Where will I find my sky with rainbow?

Right or wrong, I have chosen my fate
Will you be or you wont be my mate?

Embarking upon an unknown destination
I have with me my love and my passion

I am not a moon I am not a flower
Neither a leaf that shines after shower

I don’t have a beauty that can blind the eyes
I am a small blinking star in the corner of sky

What lies ahead of the mist and dark?
Will I be left with a broken heart?

With a smile on my face, I will bear the pain
My eyes wont have tears so much it will rain!!!


Beautiful, very well done talat. keep writing  glasses2
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Meena is back
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2006, 05:05:44 PM »
gud one talat!!! keep writing kuddiye!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2006, 10:14:30 PM »
good one Talat!!
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sanya310
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2006, 09:28:09 AM »
beautiful, talatttt!! gud going! :hugs:
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2006, 02:42:20 PM »
Thanks a lotttttt Nidhi....love ya Usual Smile..thanks Amit..I am really glad YOU liked it !!!!

Thanks Meena..Pooja for liking it Usual Smile

Oh thanks Saani.... i am really happy you liked my poem..since i dont write english poetry much !!! tongue3

Thanks Friends !!!
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2006, 01:21:56 PM »
:oops: Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tallu amazinggg!!!!!!!!!!!! Simply have no words :oops: @@@@
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2006, 03:29:50 PM »
Thanks a lotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt sweetie...... :oops: :oops:
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Bharat
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2006, 10:07:23 PM »
Hi Talat,
It is just wonderful..........very beautiful.....

My friend at work, Sandra, also read your poem and below are her exact words of praise...!!!

Sandra also writes poems and she told me.....This poem is very beautiful. Your friend has wonderful gift of words.
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2006, 07:58:04 AM »
Quote from: "Bharat"
Hi Talat,
It is just wonderful..........very beautiful.....

My friend at work, Sandra, also read your poem and below are her exact words of praise...!!!

Sandra also writes poems and she told me.....This poem is very beautiful. Your friend has wonderful gift of words.


Thank you so much Bharat......for liking it.....i am really glad.....!! Usual Smile

Please say my thanks to Sandra.....I am very happy to have her comments...Thank you Sandra !! Usual Smile
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mili_genie
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2006, 10:04:13 AM »
no comments...... just clappped.... Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2006, 10:19:36 AM »
Thanks a tonn Milind Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2006, 07:53:59 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Walking in dark, on an unknown path
Following the light from my heart

Where am I heading? No one knows
Where will I find my sky with rainbow?

Right or wrong, I have chosen my fate
Will you be or you wont be my mate?

Embarking upon an unknown destination
I have with me my love and my passion

I am not a moon I am not a flower
Neither a leaf that shines after shower

I don’t have a beauty that can blind the eyes
I am a small blinking star in the corner of sky

What lies ahead of the mist and dark?
Will I be left with a broken heart?

With a smile on my face, I will bear the pain
My eyes wont have tears so much it will rain!!!


Must confess well written !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: March 21, 2006, 11:08:25 AM »
Thanks a lot Tosha
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