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SITTING BESIDE THE WINDOW PANE
I CRIED WHOLE NIGHT LIKE INSANE
ALL ALONE TO BEAR THIS PAIN
BURNT AM I IN LOVEABLE FLAME


THE MOON IS STILL,THE STAR SO BARE
THE WIND BLEW SOFT HURDLING MY TANGEABLE HAIR
MY SOUL IS NUMB BUT MY EYES STILL CARE
FOR THE PERSON WHO ONCE WAS SOLEMNLY RARE


MY HEART STILL POUNDS,THE WARMTH I CRAVE
IN THE TALE OF LOVE ,I WASN'T SO BRAVE
WITH A SHATTERED SOUL AND BROKEN DREAMS
I MYSELF HAVE DROWNED MY HOPES IN STREAMS


MY STORY IS PENNED ..,YET IT LACKED "THE END"
THE LOVE WE LOST ..LET MAY GOD RESEND
IF ONCE AGAIN THE PAST REWOUND,
I'M SURE THE TRUST SHALL BE FOUND



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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2009, 12:06:00 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2009, 12:08:50 AM »
THANKZ A LOT SIR !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2009, 12:12:09 AM »
Zama Ji me koi sir nhi hu U only say Rishi
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2009, 12:14:51 AM »
ji.....rishi sahab .....waise tah-e- dil se shukriya..
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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2009, 12:16:56 AM »
Only say Rishi Plz frnd me na sir hu na saheb only ek khuda ka banaya hua aapki tarah hi ek insan hu
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2009, 12:20:06 AM »
ARRE..NO HARD FEELINGS YAAR......PLZ IGNORE OTHER RESPECTIVE SYNONMS I USED TO GRADE U....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2009, 12:22:03 AM »
Ok Jaisa Aapko accha lage Zama Ji
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2009, 02:07:58 AM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Zama ji,marvelous creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 03, 2009, 02:12:20 AM »
TNX A LOT ......
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2009, 06:39:04 AM »
Very nice work indeed !
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«Reply #11 on: November 03, 2009, 06:52:43 AM »
'AM OVERWHELMED !!!!
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