ON ST. VALENTINE’S DAY EVE

by abdbundeli on February 14, 2010, 05:59:52 PM
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I want you in entirety, not in part!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet heart!

I don’t know, what one calls it; by what name!
Its some thing else .Yes, it's not just a game!

What makes the stars so lovely, and so sweet?
What makes a night so fondling, blithe upbeat?

Why counterpart turns angel, sprite-smart?
Why twined creepers stay twined, want not to part?

It's nothing else but love! Its love! Pure love!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet dove!

Those milky worlds are rendezvous forlorn!
But we will rise for love, when it's wet morn!

That morn which turns blood – red for VALENTINE!
That martyr, yet, pours, in rose buds red wine!

We’ll then exchange those rose - buds, and our hearts!
Our want be for entirety, not for parts!


                               - G.R.Prakash       



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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2010, 06:06:37 PM »
Mashallah Its A Great Piece Of Work Abd Bhai,.

Superb And Happy Valentine Day For U.

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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2010, 06:13:05 PM »
Nice sharing Abd Ji. Moved to Poetry Launge.
I want you in entirety, not in part!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet heart!

I don’t know, what one calls it; by what name!
Its some thing else .Yes, it's not just a game!

What makes the stars so lovely, and so sweet?
What makes a night so fondling, blithe upbeat?

Why counterpart turns angel, sprite-smart?
Why twined creepers stay twined, want not to part?

It's nothing else but love! Its love! Pure love!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet dove!

Those milky worlds are rendezvous forlorn!
But we will rise for love, when it's wet morn!

That morn which turns blood – red for VALENTINE!
That martyr, yet, pours, in rose buds red wine!

We’ll then exchange those rose - buds, and our hearts!
Our want be for entirety, not for parts!


                               - G.R.Prakash       



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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 06:19:13 PM »
Mashallah Its A Great Piece Of Work Abd Bhai,.

Superb And Happy Valentine Day For U.


Thanks a lot, bhai Azeem ji! Same to you!

It's a reverberation of my long-lost past! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2010, 06:27:00 PM »
Nice sharing Abd Ji. Moved to Poetry Launge.

riyaz106 ji, thanks a lot!

In fact, it's my own poem! I'm using different pen-names for my writings in English/Hindi/Urdu! Please visit the last page of my profile, for more details!
                      
     - 'G.R.Prakash'/'Ramwatiya'/'Abd Bundeli'
     

                    
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 05:12:04 PM »
Bahut Hi SUnder Likha Hai Sir Aapne ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 05:13:11 PM »
Nice sharing Abd Ji. Moved to Poetry Launge.

Riyaz Ji Aapne Ye Kha Pe Padhi hai Can U Explain
English Mein Likhi Her Post Sharing Nahi Hoti Hai
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 06:27:13 PM »
This is really your very nice creation Abd Sahab. Gustakhi ki muaafi chahta hun ke maine ise kisi aur ki poem samajhkar Poetry Launge mein move kar diya tha. Maine abhi aapka reply padha to pata chalaa ke aap English, Hindi and Urdu mein difference pen names se likhte hain. Pahle main samjha tha ke G.R.Prakash ki poem aapne share ki hai lekin wo to aap khud hi hain. Sorry for this act. Ab ise  Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry) > English mein move kar diya hai. Thanks.

riyaz106 ji, thanks a lot!

In fact, it's my own poem! I'm using different pen-names for my writings in English/Hindi/Urdu! Please visit the last page of my profile, for more details!
                       
     - 'G.R.Prakash'/'Ramwatiya'/'Abd Bundeli'
     

                     

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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 07:48:23 PM »
Bahut Hi SUnder Likha Hai Sir Aapne ApplauseApplause

Thanks, Rishi ji!

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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2010, 07:53:03 PM »
This is really your very nice creation Abd Sahab. Gustakhi ki muaafi chahta hun ke maine ise kisi aur ki poem samajhkar Poetry Launge mein move kar diya tha. Maine abhi aapka reply padha to pata chalaa ke aap English, Hindi and Urdu mein difference pen names se likhte hain. Pahle main samjha tha ke G.R.Prakash ki poem aapne share ki hai lekin wo to aap khud hi hain. Sorry for this act. Ab ise  Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry) > English mein move kar diya hai. Thanks.
riyaz106 ji!
Aapney koyi galti nahin ki hai! Aisaa kayi baar hota rahtaa hai! It's okay! Thanks!

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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2010, 07:27:45 PM »
I want you in entirety, not in part!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet heart!

I don’t know, what one calls it; by what name!
Its some thing else .Yes, it's not just a game!

What makes the stars so lovely, and so sweet?
What makes a night so fondling, blithe upbeat?

Why counterpart turns angel, sprite-smart?
Why twined creepers stay twined, want not to part?

It's nothing else but love! Its love! Pure love!
Look at me with that angle, my sweet dove!

Those milky worlds are rendezvous forlorn!
But we will rise for love, when it's wet morn!

That morn which turns blood – red for VALENTINE!
That martyr, yet, pours, in rose buds red wine!

We’ll then exchange those rose - buds, and our hearts!
Our want be for entirety, not for parts!


                               - G.R.Prakash       



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Very beautiful poem...Very very nice Babu Ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2010, 07:35:33 PM »
Very beautiful poem...Very very nice Babu Ji

Thanks a lot, celmira ji!

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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2010, 01:39:49 PM »
beautiful poem....Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2010, 05:25:54 PM »
beautiful poem....Usual Smile

Thanks a lot, fatima anam ji!

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