Our Sanctuary

by bdesigurl08 on February 02, 2007, 09:55:51 PM
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I am a very new writer so please bere with me and comments are very much appreciated.

That night,
That summer night,
I lay in my bed,
A gentle wind whispered in the trees
And I felt your body next to mine
My head resting on your chest--
Your fragrance strong in my mind--
We lay there, silent
Not a single word uttered.
No sex, no making out,
Just laying there,
Laying there till our bodies became one--
Minds combined,
Souls attached,
In a peaceful sanctuary,
Our sanctuary.
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2007, 06:53:11 PM »
Welcome to YoIndia Tomita Usual Smile

Nice one from you...Keep writing !!
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2007, 03:34:04 PM »
thnx talat.
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