:: pArAdIsE oF mY dReAmS : tHe HaPpIeSt PlAcE :::English

myheart_ursonly

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"paradise" -amit, verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com

I dream of a paradise every night and day,
where all my pains and sorrows walk away.
Beautiful red roses, smelling sweet,
Colourful butterflies, dancing feet to feet.
I breathe in the freshness of healthy air,
and hear birds chirping, here and there.
Stream of river flowing down a place,
I cant explain the beauty of such a beautiful face.
This is a place where everyone will feel right,
orange flowers singing in the music of sunlight.
Wrapped in the nature's warm embrace,
paradise of my dreams is the happiest place.

Usual Smile


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2005, 08:29:06 AM »

very nice

I dream of a paradise wid open or closed eyes
I c u there holdin me n fillin my heart wid all d joys.
Dis dream ain't only a dream I know it will come true
I know these buds will blossom wen they come out of d blue.
These birds here r dancing a tune & singing a welcomne song just 4 u
As soon as u step in2 my paradise they will shed flowers on u.
Dis way atleast 4 a moment,I know u'll say "I love U"
but dear I can sing dis song forever even widout u.
U make dis paradise worth
though u belong 2 d earth
Dis little portion of land will soon take a re-birth
So,my dear im waiting 4 u 2 enter 2 make my life worth.


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2005, 08:33:24 AM »

hai re....... mansi .......

paradise aur nature poem mein bhi love story........ kya baat hai..... ek naya thread start karte hain....... post the pic of ur bf/gf..... :wink: and a poem dedicated to them :oops: :oops: :oops: par shayad koi entry na mile :sad:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2005, 08:48:40 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

lol...maine dhyaan hi ni diya yaar ki teri poem nature+paradie pe hai .....chal koi ni,mere dimaak mein to bas LOVE hi aata hai sad5

lemme try again

I dream of a paradise day in & day out......
where I'll plant all my wishes widout any fear,widout a single doubt.
This paradise will have all flowers dat spell beauty
and teachin them a new song will be my pleasant duty.
Oh so gracefull it'll look, wen birds will dance in d magical sky
Clearing all d clouds of sadness in everybody's life thereby
I can feel d pure air as my dreams sweep out d dirt
Dis dirt given by d society won't ever exist
My paradise will have every desire passionately kissed.
All I can dream of in mu life will be there in my paradise
d rivers,d mountains,wud be flattered n won't take off there twinkling eyes
U will c everythin beyond d universe will survive in my Paradise !!


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2005, 10:14:06 AM »

badi jaldi likh di yaar......... aur bahot achchi hai.....

mansi is great yom yom yom

beautiful poem....... rating : 4 :wink:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2005, 10:30:11 AM »

lol thanx Amit! U know I jus dun have 2 apply any mind wen I think abt Him......words,jus keep comin. :wink:


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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2005, 02:36:41 PM »

nice both.


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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2005, 03:00:46 PM »

gr8 all


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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2005, 05:34:03 PM »

thnx nidhi n yogi


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2005, 03:40:46 AM »

thanx all! Usual Smile


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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2005, 12:30:41 PM »

Wow Amit !

I didnot know, u can write such a wonderful poem !

Really really very nice !

and Mansi, of course, as good as always.

very good both of you !


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2005, 05:55:36 PM »

Quote from: "prannav"

Wow Amit !

I didnot know, you can write such a wonderful poem !

Really really very nice !

lol

thnx!!


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bond

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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2005, 08:40:15 AM »

grrr888 work buddy.....


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2005, 12:20:26 PM »

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grrr888 work buddy.....

thnx bond


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