Please ! come back

by Sshiv007 on February 13, 2010, 04:59:09 PM
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You are the one who my heart called my own

I desire to consecrate my life in your Arms.
I desire to merge my every breath with Yours
Where you are , please come back

Now, living without you is a punishment
please , meet in the way that two waves do.

i will never separate, yes this is my promise.
to hold my promise , please come back
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 05:33:53 PM »
Moved to appropriate section!

thnx!
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 05:34:20 PM »
verry nicely writtn shiv ji..
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 09:46:29 AM »
Beautiful Emotions!!!!

Too Good Shivji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2010, 09:55:26 AM »
Wah too good Shiv ji.great creation.excellent
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2010, 10:07:04 AM »
 Clapping Smiley    Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2010, 01:15:50 PM »
Nice
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2010, 07:12:36 PM »
thank u for comment....
plz always do it.
it apriciate me.
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2010, 07:20:15 PM »
Thank u Rishi bhaiya , apka comment mujhe really bahut protsahit karta hai.

hope ! ki aage b aap mujhe protsahit karenge..
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