Poetry

by swaroopam on June 02, 2005, 06:53:20 PM
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swaroopam
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I love you
In the spirit of the Moon.

I love you
In the spirit of the Sun

I love you
In the spirit of the Universe

I love you
In the spirit of the Nature

I love you
In the spirit of the Spirits

-For, you are the Spirit!
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bose
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2005, 10:07:16 AM »
very good swaroopam ji.
nice poitery
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Kisi k dil mein basana bura to nahi
kisi koo dill mein basana khata to nahi
Gunah hai yeh zamane ki nazar mein to kya hua
Zamane wale bhi insan hai khuda to nahi.
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hina_chandni
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2005, 03:15:25 PM »
very good poetry swaroopam n bose ji...... keep it up
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swaroopam
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2005, 08:47:55 PM »
Thanks for the messages!
I like to write Haiku, a Japanese form of Poetry!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2005, 01:10:45 PM »
Its nice swaroopam


I am moving it to poetry section...please post poetry in shayari sections..accordingly.....
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swaroopam
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Hi!
«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2005, 08:27:55 PM »
Hi!

Thanksfor the reply!
I will try posting it in the Shayari section from next time!
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 11:45:13 AM »
I love you
In the spirit of the Moon.

I love you
In the spirit of the Sun

I love you
In the spirit of the Universe

I love you
In the spirit of the Nature

I love you
In the spirit of the Spirits

-For, you are the Spirit!
GOOD EFFORT----GOOD SPIRIT---We all are spirits...
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rawattanha
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2009, 12:41:03 PM »
NICE LINES BUDDY GOOD. BUT ABT LOVE I WANT TO SAY THAT

LOVE IS THE GENTAL SMILE
UPON THE LIPS OF BEAUTY.

SO LOVE ALL THINGS WHICH MADE BY THE GOD.

I love you
In the spirit of the Moon.

I love you
In the spirit of the Sun

I love you
In the spirit of the Universe

I love you
In the spirit of the Nature

I love you
In the spirit of the Spirits

-For, you are the Spirit!
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dreamless_guy4ever
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2009, 09:49:27 PM »
nice poetry keep it up dear!!!!!!!!!!
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swaroopam
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2009, 05:28:50 AM »
Thanks for the reply!
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