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by Anu... on January 05, 2010, 09:47:37 AM
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Adolance hits age
age behind the barrier
age of sucess or the age of learning
my goal is important to me.

no age no barrier
promisses lie ahead
people come and complain
still i lie ahead
some where down at the bottom
people do praise i feel i lie at
my own possesions.

but still the things that i own rests
at its place somewere
still i am not satisfied by my self.
no matter how much i learn,
things remain inculcated inside me,
no out put. I potray my feel on my
paper or in my laptop
thank god no one sees it i feel good.
 
 I see someone else's work than why i feel indimitaded
by my own self. the person showes his work
 why can't i, i am known by nobody
still why do i rest in peace?.....
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Anu...
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2010, 09:49:20 AM »
Any suggestions
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2010, 12:05:35 PM »
Welcome In Yoindia Anu JI
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2010, 06:45:57 AM »
Nice
Welcome to Yoindia Anu ji
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fatima anam
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2010, 04:10:26 PM »
wonderful poem....keep writing:)
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