Suddenly

by no_good_stranger on September 20, 2007, 08:16:54 PM
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no_good_stranger
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Suddenly my future seems so much brighter
Even my body so much lighter

the beauty of nature i now see everywhere
and the fragrance of flowers fill the air

even though it all feels so strange
i pray to God-let this feeling never change

But then i take a look in the mirror,what i see makes me worry
so quickly of to the doctor i hurry

no, dont stress,no reason to fear
were you worried,did you shed a tear?

This is one ilness that needs no operation
just some sweet words and your loves affirmation
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2007, 11:28:07 PM »
true said

very gud expression

Usual Smile

:D :D :D
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2007, 05:36:54 AM »
Quote from: "no_good_stranger"
Suddenly my future seems so much brighter
Even my body so much lighter

the beauty of nature i now see everywhere
and the fragrance of flowers fill the air

even though it all feels so strange
i pray to God-let this feeling never change

But then i take a look in the mirror,what i see makes me worry
so quickly of to the doctor i hurry

no, dont stress,no reason to fear
were you worried,did you shed a tear?

This is one ilness that needs no operation
just some sweet words and your loves affirmation


Very Good... Expressive lines... Keep up Stranger ji...
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2007, 02:08:25 PM »
Thank you,Sahiba and Roja always so encouraging
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