The Day is Near

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The day of resurrection is almost near,
My heart is beating badly with fear.

Soon we will be called to account,
On our good deeds our life will amount.

There will be no place to hide,
Everyone will be standing side by side.

Soon our names will be called on,
To do good deeds, the time has gone.

There will be no time to repent,
On our good deeds, we will depend.

As the sun rises from the west,
Time has gone to do our best.

Few bad deeds we did not,
Few good deeds is all we've got.

The time to do good has not gone by,
We have to do good before we die
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2008, 04:00:34 PM »
Well every one has to face this day
Some have done it some are doing it
For some it is yet to come their way
Like it or not we all will be reaching it

Good descriptive work Shivani
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2008, 04:12:28 PM »
good work shivani Applause
keep it up
 nice thoughts Rajesh ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2008, 08:39:39 PM »
once again... very well structured! you have a way of your own with couplets and stanzas. keep it going!
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2008, 11:35:06 PM »
Very well said, Shivani. Superb piece of work. This is precisely what lies ahead.


THE PATH TO HEAVEN IN NOT CLEAR
IT WOULD BE OPEN ONLY TO "HIS" DEAR


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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2009, 12:33:41 PM »
good work shivani Applause
keep it up
 nice thoughts Rajesh ji
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Thanx Diya Ji
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