unfair

by sanya310 on August 26, 2006, 07:49:27 PM
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I feel the world is not worth living
Because it is so unfair
All my life I had been craving
For someone who would care.

When I find that that person one day
All that emptiness is gone
but the very next day he's taken away
Once again, I'm left all alone.

Why is life so mean to me
I've never done anything bad
Each and every time this life
took away all the love I had.

I have to talk to you, Mr life
What number should i dial?
Why cant you sometimes ease my strife
and make living this life worthwhile?

This is really the limits now
I can't take it anymore
To keep smiling I had taken a vow
But I'm not even gona try anymore.
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2006, 10:29:28 AM »
Sanya... I Just Loved it...
Very nice words and very deep feelings...
This is just amazing... =D> =D>
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2007, 09:15:33 PM »
thanks a lot shikha! :D
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2007, 07:05:33 PM »
SANYA..REALLY VERY NIICE
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sanya310
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2007, 03:23:09 PM »
thnks khwaish.. Usual Smile
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Affluent
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2007, 04:25:22 AM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
I feel the world is not worth living
Because it is so unfair
All my life I had been craving
For someone who would care.

When I find that that person one day
All that emptiness is gone
but the very next day he's taken away
Once again, I'm left all alone.

Why is life so mean to me
I've never done anything bad
Each and every time this life
took away all the love I had.

I have to talk to you, Mr life
What number should i dial?
Why cant you sometimes ease my strife
and make living this life worthwhile?

This is really the limits now
I can't take it anymore
To keep smiling I had taken a vow
But I'm not even gona try anymore.


its So emotional sanya, i can feel the pain in the words

Ups and downs are part of life
then why always "down" keep on strike (me)
the way i loved,always make me pride
but why u make me to go through painly ride

days after days, nights after nights
i had suffered a lot,its never gonna fine
my heart turned cold, tears of eyes dry
I'm now living corpse, but you will never realise
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2007, 11:32:06 PM »
Very well expressed... and chosen words... very touchy...Sanya
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sanya310
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2007, 07:41:22 PM »
thanks affluent, and roja!! glad u people liked it!!
nice words affluent.. lovely..
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