Walking alone on the Beach

by Raajbornonlyforyou on September 03, 2010, 04:55:48 PM
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I am walking alone on the beach
I found no one around me
All alone and on my own
I am just walking in to the sea
Thought somebody will stop me
I heard a voice , somebody whispering in my ears
But I ignored it and going in to the deep of the sea
It's very cold windy day
As the water touches me slowly
I am losing my hope of living here  calmly
I opened my hands as I am welcoming the death
I closed my eyes and I almost stopped my breath
Then a hand touched me so softly
And heard a deep voice of a girl
''Raaj .......  Don't leave me please''
And she is none other than my love
She took me from there with her
Now I am walking on the beach but this time not alone
She is with me and my lonliness gone away
She filled my day with the brightest smile on my face
I am so deeply in love with her
And I believe she is the only one who understood me completely
I am writing her name on the sand in that beach
With my name just to her
I am talking to her , laughing at her on her every joke
I am loving myself to be a fool to see her smiling face everytime
I love her hairs, her eyes and her lips
I cannot stop myself from starring her continuously
She is my beautiful angel
She danced with me in that lonely beach in that cold windy air and in that beautiful rain
She is with me till the sunset at that beach
And this is my happiest day which I cannot forget in my life .........Raaj

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She is not real and she is not with me there . She is just a name on the sand which I wrote before going in to the sea , I don't know how I came back form the beach but I really felt her presence there and first and last time she is with me....Raaj
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 05:02:44 PM »
very touching,,,,,,,and impressive........seems like have felt this many times.....
«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 05:07:50 PM »
Raaj Bhai Welcome here dear....

Very tochi post you shared here... Very nice thanks for sharing...... Keep sharing keep posting.. Usual Smile


«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 07:42:22 PM »
very touching,,,,,,,and impressive........seems like have felt this many times.....

Thank you very much for your read and comments......Raaj
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