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« on: June 11, 2008, 02:55:19 PM »

I was just a selfish, little girl,
Who thought she could do anything.
I thought I was better then anyone else,
That I didn't need anyone.

I thought I could live without love,
Without anyone to love me.
I was thinking that all the days,
'Cus I thought No one loves me.

But life is long,
And new surprises come every day.
Life is long,
And you never know what's gonna happen.

Someone special came into my life,
And learned me how to live.
That very special person was no one else,
It was you.

You learned me how to love,
You learned me what it really is.
You learned me that I'm not alone,
You learned me that I need someone.

When you came...

But then it's those days,
When you're gone.
I don't want those days,
When we haven't talked.

Do you know this loneliness?
I hope you do,
I hope you feel it too.
I hope I soon can talk with you.

I want you to learn me more,
More about life.
I want you to come now,
Like the first day you came,
Came into My Life.
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« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 03:52:31 PM »

nice one attoo.....
 here is one for you
mask
that morning i waked up scared and screaming,
boy..what was that ,that i was dreaming.

then i saw u sleeping...all curled up and smiling
sucks ur hair were sluggish...but your face shining.

then i remembered that dream...it was a nightmere,
i was dead honey, and may be you were there.

people were there crying..i was in the coffin all the while
forgive me darling...but i thought i saw you smile

honey there is a question ,i never dare not ask
is your beautiful face just a mask

              guys, my english is not very good ...so please forgive me for any mistakes.thanx
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« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2008, 11:42:23 AM »

 Applause Applause Applause
Again good job attoo!!!

Very well written akela ji!!
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