you are my lord

by no_good_stranger on October 03, 2007, 08:22:09 AM
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your love fulfills me
in you ny LORD i find completion
your love shelters me
in you my LORD i find protection
your love adorn's me
in you my LORD i find beautification
your love sustains me
in you my LORD i find gratification

Oh all glory to you my LORD

you honor me with izzat and bless me with sight
who created the jewel like stars and the moon so bright
the fiery sun and the wind that cools just right
the vast ocean with its foam so white
and the rivers on earth that flow with great might

Oh all glory to you my LORD

from your mercy i beg salvation
negate my weakness and grant me determination
by your power save me from deprevation
and grant me sabr at times of devastation
and let me not be horty and save me from humiliation

Oh all glory to you my LORD
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2007, 02:11:25 PM »
Nice work.
I noticed use of sabr and izzat.
This is poem is talking directly without using a simple way and is expressive.
«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2007, 09:05:37 AM »
thanks for the appreciation,always.thought I'll add "izzat" and "sabr"just for the flavour,and to keep a link with my roots.Thanks again Ricky
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