YOU NEVER CAME BACK~~~

by sonal on February 26, 2007, 06:31:34 PM
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DAYS PASSED YOU NEVER CAME BACK,
I KEPT ON WAITING,
THINKING THAT YOU WOULD COME ONE OR THE OTHER DAY,
BUT I WAS WRONG,
YOU WERE MY PAST,
I KEPT ON WAITING FOR MY PAST,
LEAVING MY DREAMS,
LEAVING MY FUTURE,
BUT YOU NEVER CAME BACK.
THEN I UNDERSTOOD MY PAST HAS GONE FOREVER.
MY PAST WAS MY PAST.
I HAVE TO LIVE FOR MY FUTURE NOW .
A NEW LIFE I HAVE TO BEGIN............
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2007, 07:43:41 PM »
i like that  ... :D ... strong feelings.
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2007, 08:41:15 PM »
in ur lines there's a sense of mentality.......and thts y  this is realy touching.........coz love is also a mentality ....so very nice ,keep goin' sonal ji......
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2007, 12:30:39 AM »
Gud Job Sonal......!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 01:31:42 PM »
yap... its sweet one Sonal...

It called life,
Its must go on,
Some makes us laugh .
some makes us cry,
some being with us,
when we are abt to touch sky..
some caleed friends
some says bye...
so forget ur past..
lets ur happiness fly...
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 06:12:17 PM »
thanx to allllllllllllllllllll for that sweet appreciation...................
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2007, 02:22:45 AM »
it shows acceptence and will power
to forget the past and walk towards the  future i shall learn a lot from this poem
thankyou very much

to sonali from vishnu
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2007, 09:52:38 PM »
its nice to knw that my poem gave  someones inspiration.............to live in present
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